Cause and Effect Vision Record

The writing is very graphic and the characters are very three-dimensional. I was completely absorbed by the story.

The writing style is fresh and not cliché, the plot design is clever, the foreshadowing is natural, and the twists are not abrupt. The character's growth line is clear, and the character is three-dimensional and not flat. It is a rare high-quality novel.

It's very graphic, it would be even better if it was a movie

I read part of it, and the writing is okay. It's a rare first-person masterpiece, a bit stream-of-consciousness, but there are too many characters, and it looks a bit like a group portrait, or a first-person group portrait. Unfortunately, I don't like group portraits I also always feel that the author writes the characters except the protagonist like game NPCs, and the protagonist needs to be with them one by one. Dialogues are made after contact to push the plot. One or two scenes are fine, but seven or eight scenes start to get weird. For example, the protagonist enters the room and talks to No. 1. The conversation ends, and then goes to Room 2 to talk to No. 2, And then No. 3... Until No. 7 Or 8, it is written like a human machine It is a work with its own advantages but also obvious shortcomings.