Time Travel at the Same Time, Starting from the Dragon and Snake, Invincible to the Heavens

A memory is written in more than ten chapters, more than ten chapters, and the memory is written in such detail. Is this a memory? There is a big problem with the narrative method. If I can get ten points in the college entrance examination essay, it is because the teacher is kind. Taking advantage of the fact that there are few people and few chapters, I have changed the first two chapters to the back. Various other issues have been reviewed by other book friends. I can only say that this book has great potential.

Is it true that he only appeared after writing 20 golden fingers in the same genre? A bit interesting

Aren't they traveling at the same time? Why is there only one protagonist, and there are other protagonists? The protagonist of another world

The beginning of this book is a bit weird. It has nothing to do with the introduction. The protagonist is also a middle school boy. Has the original text been revised? When was Goldfinger written?

It's a bit speechless. You beat someone to death and you go back to school. At least you can find a lawyer and it's not like you have no money.

As title. Because the protagonist of this plot builds a foundation for a hundred days, which is a process of the protagonist's growth, but as some book friends have reported, it is indeed a bit boring. In order not to affect everyone's reading experience, I will release the saved manuscripts at once.

Tong Chuan Liu is most taboo about writing a little here and a little there

What do you think of your book? It was written with intention but there are a lot of mistakes. It is not consistent with famous books. The foreshadowing is too long and some of it is unnecessary. It does not get into the theme quickly. The golden finger comes too late. The protagonist's past life is not clearly explained. It starts with a middle school boy in high school and has no mature and stable aspects. Fortunately, your book has been recommended, otherwise it would probably be thrown away!

What are you writing about in the latest chapters? Now Li Wansen, now Boss Zhou, the author, why don't you look at yourself and see if you are dizzy?

I was speechless. The protagonist slaughtered hundreds of ferocious beasts at the beginning and captured them with ease. Then he reincarnated and took care of all these things. All 15 years were wasted. He didn't know how to use such strong force in his previous life. Did someone write the three golden chapters? Then the author hasn't read the first three chapters at all?

Covering the sky is okay, many people see it, but the main reason is that no one is convinced by anyone, and the emperor of the world is also good-looking, a master of the Majia style,

Brother, you can't even make ends meet by writing a book like this. Logically speaking, Goldfinger and the world view should have been revealed in the first few chapters, but you didn't show up until more than 20 chapters. You should have written the world of dragons and snakes you wrote a long time ago, but you just didn't write it. Instead, you went to study, trains, gyms and other unimportant matters. You also used the reverse order method in the first two chapters.

Can you click on the top to update? It's only the 3rd update and I'm trying to trick people into it.

This protagonist is too young and underage. Even in his previous life, he was not old enough and has insufficient education!

There are about twenty chapters, a mess, the narrative is reversed, the plot is incoherent, the connections are wrong, and the content is missing.

What's going on? Didn't it say it was rebuilt and updated? Why isn't it better now?

,,,,, I originally wanted to watch the story of Dragon and Snake in Tongchuanliu, but in the end, there was only one chapter that could be read,,, it was too watery and boring.

The chapters after Chapter 2 are all water

The progress is too slow, Golden Finger only comes in chapter 20