A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Fairy Song Yu Has Assigned You a Quest

What's the use of writing something in Chapter 19? Those who ridicule you will be killed later. What's the use of talking back? I'm afraid of cheating.

Can the author stop using Tang Dao as his natal magic weapon? The shape of your Tang Dao was speculated by a dealer. It turns out that it is not like that. Besides, it is really awkward to use Tang Dao to cultivate immortals. Otherwise, you can use towers, bells, flags, pictures, gourds, etc.; If you want to follow the crowd, you can use swords, needles, shuttles, maces, spears, etc. You can also use crescent blades to repair the moon, but don't use Tang knives, which are neither fish nor fowl.

This novel can be said to be getting better and better, and several points can be confirmed (these points are rare among ordinary people) 1. The author really understands the plot, characters, and settings, Feiyun 2. He has his own ideas and does not follow the same old plot. 3. Moderate plug-ins and strong plot expansion, such as Du Dong's copy, Liu Yu's copy, Xiao Cangkun's copy, and the plot expansion of Luan Xinghai 4. The writing style is in line with the original work of Mortal Mortal 5. The emotional description is not good but reasonable. The progress is good Disadvantages, the writing in the early stage is a bit messy, and the limited-time rewards may discourage people from quitting (but it will not affect it if you read it patiently). The title of the work may give people the impression of a third-rate work that is too popular.

In the first chapter, the cultivation levels before and after are not up to par. Han Li ran away and the sea of ​​stars was in the middle stage of foundation construction. Song Yu was at least the golden elixir stage at that time. When he opened his mouth, Song Yu was in the Qi training stage. His tone was really loud.

Why do the male protagonists in many mortal fanfics revolve around women? Isn't it possible to cultivate immortality and live forever if you don't revolve around women?

The introduction about marrying someone is a bit poisonous to me. Why are you rushing to lick the couple's affairs?

Back? Please learn to ask for leave next time, even if you are a eunuch, please inform everyone.

1. The opening is novel, it seems that it is not a Chenmalan Valley opening like the Yellow Maple Valley of the Seven Sects of Yue Kingdom. 2. The plot is unconventional, innovative, and staggered from the cliche timeline of following Han Li (stealing Han Li's opportunities, stealing women and other poisonous points are perfectly avoided), the time difference is not too huge, and the expectations for the subsequent plot development are appropriate in terms of perception. 3. The setting of the original work is exquisite, and the second setting is basically reasonable. 4. He Yuyu's emotional lines are delicately drawn and have a three-dimensional feel, not a card.

Chapter 29 is written too deliberately. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't force the role. There is also a setting that Song Yu is 20 years younger than Han Li. I don't know where to read it. Song Yu formed an elixir before she was a hundred years old. According to the middle stage of elixir formation for the first time in the anime, she is 160 years old when she is 20 years younger than Han Li. She goes from the early stage of elixir formation to the middle stage of elixir formation in 60+ years. Is this Tianlinggen?

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