War of Resistance: Starting with a Shotgun and Sweeping Across Enemy Lines

If you want to write about the Anti-Japanese War properly, don't write it as an Anti-Japanese War romance novel.

Too much bullshit and incoherent in places. I feel like a newbie author. After you write it, you have to read it several times and revise it.

The author has been emphasizing that setting the male protagonist's age to make him mature, but the man suddenly laughs when he doesn't take the initiative, and there are many immature thoughts, which feels too mature 😰. This is a classic writing style that cannot keep up with the setting, so it is self-contradictory.

I can't stand the first chapter anymore, retreat

It would be okay if it was the Lone Ranger type! I'll definitely join the organization if I'm rewarded with drawings and the like! It's better to be a lone ranger and show personal heroism! There is a plug-in anyway! The author's plug-in was too blunt when it appeared! What else is the purpose! So embarrassing! Unnatural

Good! Looks great, I'll give you 6 recommendation votes

How did you achieve 500 collections?

Author, why did you set the protagonist to be an old man in his 50s? Can't you be younger? {"NickName":"Book Friends 161004005940660","UserId":223578657}

After reading four chapters, I feel like you, the author, are just talking about numbers at the beginning. It would be too awkward to give up.

😅Can this system stop being so outrageous? Can't watch anymore

Hello comrades, book friends, and bosses, I am the author of this book. This book, Old Hunter in Lunan, Resistance Behind Enemy Lines, has been in preparation for a long time. It was just released this afternoon. It has only 6,000 words. I didn't expect it to be ranked fifteenth on the military new book list. To be honest, I am very emotional, and I am particularly grateful for everyone's strong support. When writing a book, I pay attention to multiple researches, no random fabrication, no plot, no red lines, constant updates, no supervision, and careful writing of each chapter. This time with the Anti-Japanese War treasure box system behind enemy lines, we also want to make the story more exciting and beautiful while ensuring a rich sense of history. Today I am opening a small discussion thread, and I would like to ask all the bosses: Do you prefer to watch hard-core battlefield fighting, or guerrilla outsmarting behind enemy lines? Welcome to chat in the comment area. The editor will carefully refer to your opinions and adjust the plot design as appropriate. In addition, I would like to shamelessly ask for help: The boss who has a surplus of monthly votes in his hand, just throw in a few, which is the greatest encouragement to me. Let's work together to write this story about the war of resistance behind enemy lines in southern Shandong👌🏻