
Douluo Dalu: I Pieced Together Martial Souls and Created a God
斗罗:武魂拼图,我拼出了一个神
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- Ongoing
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- 57k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 5mo ago
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- Qidian
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Your biggest problem is that you don't want to write the original plot, but you bound Huo Yuhao at the beginning to take advantage of others' growth. This is very embarrassing.
Because you have too many mechanisms and are too complicated, you are afraid that readers will not understand them, so you have to keep throwing out settings. The settings must be reasonable and detailed, which takes up too much space, causing your plot to fail to advance and attract people. The original work of Douluo is originally a very white book. It is not easy for you to write flowers. The whole simple and powerful mechanism
It's too complicated. If you want everything, you'll only end up with nothing. Since you want spiritual eyes or body martial souls, then you should focus on attaching different body martial souls to each soul ring and puzzle piece, instead of getting a spiritual eye for the first soul ring, an ice soul ring for the second soul ring, and preparing to get a fire soul ring...
In fact, I still prefer the author to write a fanfic of Legend of Dragon King 😁
Is this still following Shrek? I don't want to read a book with Shrek as the protagonist?
Bubbles, I hope the author can update this stably, or continue to update the previous book on Reincarnation of Gods.
Such a design is simply unrealistic.
Is there such a strange martial spirit?
Will the Shrek freshmen contestants use soul tools? And it's not a soul guide made by myself. This is so inconsistent with the original work. If you do this, those who are not short of money will get custom-installed soul cannons in the next session.
How does the author use Tianmeng's soulless ice attribute martial soul position? If it fails, the Ice and Snow Emperors are actually useless and can only be used to protect the Tao. However, the protagonist currently has no god-level potential, so Tang San will not target it. The martial soul will not have god-level potential without a second awakening to complete it. If it does, we have to consider the second design of the Haotian Sect and the Holy Spirit Cult or Tang San's new plot. The subsequent martial soul position can be considered to be transformed into a beast soul weapon to create an artifact. The premise is that the mechanism of the puzzle martial soul is complete and not Nowadays, a martial spirit has ten functions. In this case, it is at best to expand the comprehension of attributes. In this case, it is better to get a silver dragon bloodline to strengthen it through the second awakening. In this way, the elements are basically fully cultivated, and there is also the soul ring of the Thunder Hell Vine. If you understand the principle, you can directly increase the number of years of the soul ring yourself, but you will have to be struck by lightning. You can also practice physical training by the way. Before Lan Xuanyu becomes a god, should he consider building a light and dark divine thunder training body in the light and dark space?