Dragon Clan, Lu Mingfei Is Learning Card Making in Another World

Humanity has developed less than one percent of Lu Mingfei

The description is very good, but it's a pity that it's a fan. The last thing fans need is to describe the protagonist's character.

I think I've seen this worldview before. It's a cat novel, right? The protagonist over there should be the young master of the noble family, the shy blond boy whom Lu Mingfei called aunt.

I feel like the writing is messy, here and there. And it's too watery

Author, is the timeline the new version or the old version? The new one seems to be from 2010, but the old one is definitely from 2009. In 2009, hundreds of thousands could still afford a decent house in second- and third-tier cities.

It's like this. Your readers, or the people who are attracted to read it, should all be here for the Dragon Clan fandom. You wrote the part about cards very well👌🏻The writing style is also good, but you write too much about the alien world. There is another main problem here. Other people's Lu Mingfei means that they travel back and forth like you. The world they travel through is generally recognized by the public, or the world where fandom often appears, which leads to a problem. , Even if your writing is very good, people may not want to see more plots in the card world. However, most of the fanfics started from Lu Mingfei's high school, and you reshaped his character from junior high school. I was attracted by this setting at the time, and I am a protagonist controller. I think the way you wrote Lu Mingfei's pretense and ejaculation were refreshing enough and not artificial. In addition, the treatment of the uncle's family is the most unique, which is what really attracts me. In summary, I want to say that if the author wants to attract more people and continue writing with high quality and quantity, you'd better cut off the plot of the other world. Of course, if you are just generating electricity purely for love and writing whatever comes to mind, then just pretend that I didn't say anything 😎

The comprehensive network is gone. It seems that the purely card-making world has been transferred to each other? Card duel seems to only look at the card face? There is also the exploration of different worlds, and the traveling frog set is also said to have been briefly introduced?

I feel like the theme of Zongwang shouldn't be used, it's too easy to mess up. It's better to write it as a traditional world-traveling story

I feel like I can read it but I haven't written it clearly at all. It's all here and there.

Water, it's too watery, I can't bear the complete stream of consciousness 😅

The recent storylines have been boring and devoid of substance. In Chapter 5, I think the only thing that counts as an event is the appearance of the "Fire Dragon" that triggers a "riot" by the human observation agency.

Is the world that Lu Mingfei traveled through a fan of another novel? Which novel?

How does the author plan to deal with the mother of the protagonist of the original novel? The Valkyrie and his maids are really attractive, and I really don't understand why the original intention was to separate the maids.

I saw that there was no option to initiate a vote on the assistant interface, so I used my account at Qidian to initiate a vote Friends who have read books all year round and visited friend sites should be able to tell that my book uses the general settings of another book (Although that book also clearly stated (Using the settings of Harry Potter, Yu-Gi-Oh, and Digimon) And since this kind of academic novel must contain the settings of students, I am also considering whether to write him out as the protagonist of the original work () In fact, I am also afraid, mainly because if someone thinks that my book is slandering him The protagonist will probably call me. Don't blame me if I'm the first one to delete the book () ——Ahem, in short, I'm sending you a poll so that everyone can speak freely. The author wants to take a look at the general direction of the trend and then decide how much presence the original villain will play in the story. I'm wondering should we keep his intensity in the original story, or should we strengthen it, or is it just an episode in Lu Mingfei's story, or do you have other arrangements for him, please tell us (You can also understand that the author is dead and wants to copy the book review)

Damn it, I've only watched it for a few days, why have I finished watching it again?

Emmm, the elements that have appeared so far include but are not limited to dnd, card guys, war hammers, Du Kang's Pipi Shrimp, Xingyue, Planes Locke... The pace is slow, the protagonist is motivated but not under pressure, the writing is average among dragon fans, the content is a hodgepodge but the processing is okay, it doesn't look abrupt, just consider it food.

I feel like the subject matter is good. But if you have a criminal record, just keep it on your bookshelf.

Friends, chat more so that I can copy the book review (bushi) What kind of cards or elves do you want to see? Let me know, and I will put it in if it is suitable The Planeswalker system of Magic: The Gathering is good in this way. They can even put 40,000 hammers in it, so don't worry about your ideas being acclimated (

Speaking of which, is there an explicitly mentioned female protagonist in this book?

How does the author plan to arrange the heroine?

There have been no paid chapters. Is the author planning to write the book for free?

It's already on the shelves, why is it still so watery?

How to get Luo Tianyi out? I don't see any effect

There are very few books about planeswalkers. Do any of you readers have any recommendations? Can write web articles that taste like planeswalkers

First

I haven't seen this subject before, so I'll search for recommendations first.

Suddenly found the prison road and knew about Warhammer