I, the Execution Dragon, but a Cute Mod

The portrayal of the protagonist is very embarrassing. I feel that this effeminate mod also has an intelligence-reducing effect, and communication with others is extremely inefficient. It either relies on cognitive distortion or supporting characters, and the performance is disaster-level. Is there little difference between MC and the real world? The protagonist has not yet realized that he is in the second world. There are countless physical properties in the real world that are completely different from those in MC, and the supporting characters are not aware of them either. All the supporting characters only noticed that the protagonist was clumsily pretending to be a human being with the dragon horns on his head. The protagonist made a cognitive distortion, and everyone ignored the dragon horns. But the question is what about the protagonist's words and deeds? You clearly tell everyone that the protagonist is not a human being, but ignore all the supporting characters? Is this logical? The article describes too much useless nonsense and meaningless psychological activities of the protagonist. The protagonist's mind is chaotic and he doesn't even know what he is going to do. The protagonist encounters a bloody scene and talks a lot about the car. Later, he emphasizes that he is the supreme god, so he distorts the scene into mosaics and flowers, which ruins the meaning of this bunch of things. The protagonist is the supreme god, and the supreme god hides his ears when he sees the bloody scene? Is this supreme god not as good as an ordinary person? The more it is described, the more the protagonist becomes trashy, and there are many such reverse characterizations later on. Invincible and easy? Where is the invincible? The main character is mentally retarded. Where is the ease? The information density is too low, there are too many complaints, the content is completely fragmented, and it makes people's heads hurt. It is a big taboo in Invincible to cut the combat power of the character. You have not encountered this pitfall, but if you cut off the protagonist's brain, it will appear that the protagonist's combat power is very low.

Zhu Tianwen, you don't write fan fiction, which means you have to be original in every world. If you spend energy on borrowing, you will still be chased and criticized by the original party. It's better to be a direct fan.

If you don't like the original world, it's better to write a fan story. You are originally a character in the game, and you have time traveled to other familiar games or animations. How can you become so popular?

I have seen two worlds so far.        ，，，， The supporting role is too casual, which makes me not like it. For example, otakus and autistic people who lack social interaction must feel very insecure when communicating with strangers. What's more, in the zombie apocalypse, in this case, in order to reflect their own needs, they often attach great importance to their own value. The speech here was too casual. People who knew it knew it was a zombie apocalypse, and people who didn't know it thought they were participating in a variety show. Being able to freely reveal one's shortcomings and call them "specialties" with a smile is usually only possible in a relaxed environment. Just being led by a stranger, the King of Soldiers, is a bit unjustifiable. The sense of separation between characters and reality caused by this "casualness" in the early stage can easily give readers the first impression that the author writes casually and doesn't care much about details. The stories in the text are always sudden and lack space for readers to imagine the follow-up. I am used to reading slowly, paying more attention to details, and then thinking about the follow-up development. Every hidden foreshadowing is an interaction between the author and the reader. I really didn't notice the clue that "God does not respect universal morality" in Chapter 2. I think this foreshadowing is very good. Then there are only two Superman in Chapter 2. It's hard not to think of the strongest one. Plus, I know the reference characters, which makes the plot a bit too straightforward and the emotional fluctuations are too weak, and it doesn't quite impress me. And, travelers can get together and disperse easily, and the protagonist really doesn't need to take side tasks so seriously. In my opinion, that infamous mission has no value for the protagonist to complete, and it is not impossible for the protagonist to have the ability to reunite and disperse. Seeing the protagonist give up the harvest of this station for a meaningless side mission, I felt that I had picked up sesame seeds and lost the watermelon. This chapter is really suitable for the protagonist to gradually understand people's hearts. However, just for a side mission, memorable memories turned into unbearable past events, which was a bit unfinished. I have a little suggestion here, that is, don't forget that points are meaningless to the protagonist, and side tasks are meaningless to the protagonist. Although each world will eventually leave, don't forget the meaning of travel.        ，，，

What are you writing about recently? It doesn't feel very good...

I couldn't stand it, I was attracted by the introduction, and after reading four pictures, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I've lost my mind and can't stand it

Not very good. The original world I wrote has no sense of immersion at all, and no one knows who is who. Also, the trajectory and reasons for the actions of the protagonist are also very strange. They are not like gods or humans. They can only be said to be a group of gods and humans.

Is it cognitive filtering or translation? Why do I feel like what they say is so straightforward and stupid?

The author is not suitable for Qidian, but suitable for writing on Rotten Tomatoes

Jie Jie then turned into a girl, why not turn Gojo Satoru and Xia Youjie into a girl together? Or become a girl! This... This is so much fun. Go and transform into Naruto or Sasuke. Go and curse one of the two girls into one. Just thinking about it makes you so excited

Surprisingly, it's quite interesting. The second world time travel feels like a sequel in the future where superhumans come to invade the earth and everyone discovers the truth about superman's death.

It can't be some mysterious purple-haired UP 🙂

To be honest, I thought I would see the kind of YY article with no preface and no follow-up, but the result was surprisingly good? At least I've crossed the embarrassing line of picking my feet. And the second script was pretty good, right? The Invincible Young Hero is really not suitable for writing a fanfic.

Very pretty Cute + daily

I feel like the performance of this book is almost complete.

The original world is a bit interesting. It is enough for a quick travel, but I left it a bit hastily and did not finish the explanation.

The small world and the main plot are like reading two books... Is it really okay?🙂