Become an Adventurer by Copying Monster Abilities

The plot of the cult is a bit of a joke. You know there is a problem with this mission but you still go on it. The protagonist has failed and it will be stable and developed. And why don't you build your own team and like to play single player so much? ? ? ? That temporary team also came in even though they knew that something was very likely to happen. If it hadn't been for the failure, they would have died long ago. Create a force.

Goldfinger came too late, was too coincidental, and no longer needed to exist!

Finally, there is a novel that is not about killing goblins.

The pace is slow, very slow, very slow. The combat power is low, very low, very low. One of the nine gates in charge of growth! This is a story about an adventurer crawling slowly and slowly like a maggot.

Not bad, but there were too many accidents, and life was in danger every time

This kind of update speed, and the fact that it's not on the shelf, feels like it's just a test of the waters, and it might be cut off at any time, so I stopped reading.

First of all, it's food. Every time it's a set meal. Be more imaginative. If you have money, you can order meat in large portions? Are there no more luxurious hotels? Describe it. Can't you please give me a little more words?

Advantages 1. The pace is pretty good, neither too fast nor too slow, and the control is just right (at least for me) 2. The protagonist's behavior is relatively normal at the moment. He is neither a bitter person nor a middle-aged person. He is afraid of death but not afraid of trouble. He can be considered cautious. Disadvantages 3. Some of the foreshadowings are very shallow and can be easily seen by readers, and the psychological changes that should be described in some places are not done well. For example, when facing the evil ape demon, when he was beaten to the point of death, the inner monologue of the protagonist could have been refined; and when fighting the evil village chief, suddenly learning to dodge is too abrupt. It reads like there is no foreshadowing and it will be done in a while. Can you add more inner descriptions. (For example, at the moment of life and death, the protagonist breaks through some kind of shackles on the boundary of space, and then passes through so-and-so before entering this realm) Summary: Although there are a few chapters, there is still something to behold, and the hooks are not too big or too small. It is just right compared to the Fantasy Channel, so let's keep it up first!

Why is it so similar to another eunuch novel? !

The first three chapters only lay out the world view, and they are poorly written. Just control the rhythm. The start for adventurers like low-level farmers is the same as the start for low-level people in the Yakuza Dojo. You don't have to think about it. You already know how to write it.

Chapter 60 Level 2 is faster than Level 3, the pace is very comfortable.

There should be basic combat skills such as mastering sword skills, mastering shields, mastering heavy hammers, mastering sword skills, etc., And corresponding with basic attacks in battle. There should be advanced combat skills such as Lion King Swordsmanship, XXX Military Swordsmanship, Black Rock Hammer Technique, etc., Which should strengthen the basic attack in battle The protagonist's Gluttonous Slash and other combat skills corresponding skills Forging, gathering, medicine, etc. Can also be classified as combat skills, but they are auxiliary and functional.

The protagonist's ability to manifest fantasy should be regarded as the summoning system.

The content is pretty good, but there are too few updates. It will be gone in a few minutes after a week.

Just don't write about goblin sinews

Six Claws waiting for the complete book to be read all night

It's really good. Although the pace is slow, the world view is very complete and logical. The characters are not only very memorable, they are also flesh and blood It's just too plain. The author is the trumpet of some eunuch. I'm sure not I am a newbie, the writing style is very familiar, and I am not an AI. I have read similar style before. In short, just keep writing. It is best not to be mediocre, and write more highlights of the characters. It is more enjoyable. Only when you write something different from other articles is it good-looking, innovative, and reject boring routine cycles.