Tokyo: I Don't Want to Be Divided into Five Groups by Yandere Soldiers

The writing is too stiff, the rhythm is strange, the text is deliberately exaggerated, some of the plots are inconsistent and illogical, and after chapter 15, there is a dialogue between immortals After reading Chapter 19, there are many obvious problems: 1. The male protagonist was still worried about money, and then he met a girl who confessed his love, and he directly agreed decisively, and even later said that falling in love early will lose the position of vice president of the student union that the male protagonist values ​​​​and is helpful for further studies 2. Are there cracks in the cement floor when the female protagonist throws the gangster over her shoulder? Then the author said it was probably a spinal fracture? Then there was no follow-up? Author: Do you have any idea about spinal fractures? Do you have any idea about the strength of cement floor? 3. Qingmei, who couldn't even put on clothes the night before, was able to help the male protagonist buy materials, make breakfast and clean up the next morning. So I thought you were hiding it, but in the evening the male protagonist wanted to train her, otherwise she wouldn't buy things by herself? Turn around and forget what happened in the morning? 4. The little gangster who always refreshes inexplicably, even after chapter 15, he even refreshed on the campus of a famous school, right? The student council president who tied up the chaebol eldest lady with a stick? Subspace gangster? 5. What is the function of the system? During the meeting, I first gave the male protagonist 1 million yen, and then another 1 million yen, and then spent 800,000 yen on a meal between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Not only did he have no ability to promote the plot, but it also revealed that the male protagonist had no subjective initiative at all. He knew that the president and the female protagonist were both yanderes, but he didn't respond at all. It depends on improvisation, right? 6. Speaking of the student council president, a person who has the means to monitor the male protagonist's life all day long reacts with excitement when the male protagonist dumps him, okay, let's think it's M for the time being, and then becomes frustrated when he is dumped a second time and turns into a fragile person who can be targeted by gangsters and has no ability to resist?

Is the author Tomato here? A familiar age-appropriate formula. 😥

Since they are yanderes, they should be capable of fighting, so can the protagonist invite them to a hearty samurai duel🤓

The biggest problem with this book is that the logic is not very reasonable. If you write a story about cheating on Tokyo Next Door, you will treat the male protagonist as a normal person. Here, they accept love and then post it, without any preparation or transition, and then eat 800,000 yen for a meal, which is 32,000 yuan of soft girl money, which is too outrageous

I still wanted to read the author, except Meow.

The subject matter is really good. It just lacks foreshadowing and characterization. Yandere is actually a bit cute, but pure yandere is not acceptable.

7 Characters, can you write them? Street-beating characters

Meow~ (Obtain a seat by yourself~)

I am Tetsu Ye's head, and I am now evenly divided among the yanderes. Please give me a like, and you can get one piece of the puzzle back for every thousand likes. When I am complete, I will visit you one by one. Thank you for your likes. Whee