Fellow Taoist, Your Corpse Smells so Good

The protagonist is a good person who was born in a magic sect.

I saw your comment on Writer's Assistant and came to check it out.

Is there any reader who can share with me~

What you must pay attention to when doing simulation is that simulation is only an auxiliary, and the success or failure of the protagonist still depends on the individual. 2: Why is the protagonist the protagonist? The vividness and dynamic portrayal of the characters 3: The tension and naturalness of the plot, how to avoid being too artificial 4: You are good, I support you.

Come on, let's read your third book!

Just get a big one and everything will be fine? Isn't it too childish?

Vote monthly. The Sword Journey of the Dust Shang, please read it!

Brother, your writing is a bit too story-telling and almost does not involve the protagonist, so it is difficult for readers to feel involved. In fact, your descriptions are quite good, but because of the lack of the protagonist's subjective perspective, the information is too confusing, and it is tiring and uncomfortable to read. There is a book that is slightly related to your theme called Red Dust Corpse Fairy. You can read and study the perspective of the protagonist and the release of information in his book. I feel that you are very persistent. I wish you success soon.

It seems that I am similar to you. It seems that they all cost 300,000 yuan to put on the shelves. There are more than 300 collections and single-digit readings give me a headache.

If you can get full attendance early, why not do it early? What is going on?