Chong Mei Becomes the Strongest

There were too few Chongmei fans, and they were all cut off.

Feel free to take a look for free Finally, I endured the habit of watching the previous one, and started to become wiser from saving Bai Yu. Let's stop here

Add some paragraphs about the protagonist's experience and refining spiritual objects. I feel that the plot is a bit too fast.

Not segmented? Reading a long paragraph gives me a headache

It's not easy to dote on fellow fans. With only 160,000 words, it has already reached the level of perfect master, that is, the fighting power of a lowly immortal. But after reading it, I felt that it was the author's helplessness. Because the chance of signing a contract was slim, he could only forcefully speed up the pace to write the author's own story. Oh, come on.

Chong Mei is a former True God novel. It is definitely good to write a fan novel, but the emotional line must be handled well. After all, it is a fan novel. Ye Qingzi, Chu Yue, and the little princess can all be accepted.

Come on, author, don't stop, 🤓

If you write a Chongmei fanfic, no one will criticize you.

Can you sort out the protagonist's soul pets, so that there are many soul pets at once and it is easy to mix them up.

Don't mix third person and first person, it's very confusing.

How about changing the grammar? It's always me, me, me