Dongting Immortal Clan

The depressing plot is not pleasing, but it is flavorful, sweet and bitter. Everyone has different acceptance levels. Tragedy is the result, but most people don't accept it. Live or die, figure it out or not. Ha, it still depends on where the person is. Perception determines three views, or three views determines perception. It's just freedom.

The two younger brothers are practicing at home, and their mortal brother goes out to fish every day to provide for the younger brothers to eat, drink and practice. Why are their faces so big?

To be honest, Xuanjian can't even stand it, why would he look at you like this? Or if Xuanjian can continue to read it, will he look at you? Brothers, go your own way and don't think about taking shortcuts. In this era, imitation will not make you popular. Only originality can make you popular.

When I read Chapter 20, I talked about catching a treasure tripod in the river, learning magic, and then meeting an immortal master. Well, that's the plot. Then in Chapter 10, the apprentice and adoptive father couldn't understand. The one who said he was going to be humble and then turned around and provoked the family couldn't understand even if he said harsh words. In Chapter 20, the monk appeared very abruptly and suddenly appeared in this big place to find the protagonist. Recruiting a Disciple. Why don't you write about an immortal master to get rid of the river demon in these twenty chapters? Meet the protagonist and fight the river demon to recruit the protagonist. I feel like these contents can be simply simplified into three chapters. Chapter 1: Obtaining the treasure tripod. Chapter 2: Learning the exercises. Chapter 3: Fighting the river demon. Chapter 4: Encountering the immortal master and becoming a disciple. The plot is not advanced smoothly enough and is a bit stiff. Some small plots are written like antelopes hanging their horns. Maybe it is a foreshadowing

Okay, although the plot has no explosive points, it is very smooth and has a comfortable feeling that can be picked up at your fingertips. It is better than the eight-part essay about monsters and ghosts. The words and sentences are also adequate. I should be able to pass the lottery and invest. Don't let me down! 🙂

Don't do Xuanjian's kind of abortion, it doesn't look good.

The beginning and introduction look like Xuanjian Xianzu

Catch up on the latest in one go, not bad!

When raising the net, it took three people to pull it up. Two people couldn't pull it up. Later, it took two people to hold one side of the net to lift it to the boat. How come it was lifted up with hands right after?

The first step of practice - [Acquired Spiritual Treasure Realm] There are five small spiritual treasure realms: the distracting lamp, the wooden body, the jade spring, the golden marrow and the life palace. The first level [Heart Lamp] is also the fire of the heart. Practicing requires a lot of energy. If you are not full of blood, it will be difficult. The second stage [Wooden Fetus] is also about rebirth. The human body is like a rein, and when the rein is taken off, the meridians can be molded and the mortal body can be transformed. The third realm [Jade Spring] is also a spiritual spring, opening up the source of life. The jade spring never dries up, life is endless, the energy is full, and the magic power is strong. The fourth level [Golden Marrow] is also a golden soul. The body is reborn three times and is born with jade bones and golden marrow. The soul also changes and is condensed like the true body. It is not only refining the true form, but also refining the soul. The fifth realm [Ming Palace] is also the external and internal scene. The Niwan Palace must be opened on the Lingtai, so that the soul can move in and turn into the prototype of the soul. At this point, the internal and external thoughts will be combined, and the day after tomorrow will be perfect, and the innate Qi can be tempered. The second step of practice - [Innate Qi Refining Realm] There are four levels and twelve levels in total, one level for each level. [Early stage of Qi refining] The first three floors are in the early stage of Qi refining, when the Dharma body is first formed and the true essence is first born. You can practice various transformations, practice one or two secret skills, soar into the clouds and ride in the mist. You will be very happy, and your lifespan can be up to 150 years old. [Middle stage of Qi refining] The fourth to sixth levels are the middle stage of Qi refining. The magic body is solidified and blessed by spiritual light. It is difficult to be damaged by ordinary magic weapons. The spells are proficient. They are already immortals in the eyes of mortals and can live up to 180 years old. [Later stage of Qi refining] The seventh to ninth levels are the late stage of Qi refining. The Dharma body is fully completed, the mysterious skills have been cultivated, and one or two divine powers can be displayed. At this time, it is necessary to plan and build the foundation, understand the great way, and the life span can reach 200. [Perfection of Qi Refining] Tenth to twelfth level, the deeper the cultivation level, the higher the understanding of Taoism, and the stronger the Taoist foundation can be built (it is also possible to practice deviation, or even become a demon). Often only reincarnated cultivators, or extremely talented people, can push the realm to the 11th level, or even the 12th level. The magic power and longevity are the same, but the difference between them is the different level of understanding of the Tao. The third step of practice - [Tongxuan Foundation Establishment Realm] You must tap the Taoist Heart to condense the Tao Foundation. The Tao Foundation can undergo various changes and bring its own magical powers (small magical powers). The Tao Foundation is divided into upper, middle and lower levels, and the Immortal Tao Foundation is the perfect Tao Foundation. Ordinary exercises can only become high-grade Taoist foundations. Immortal-grade exercises and corresponding immortal objects can become immortal-grade ones. A perfect Taoist foundation must be based on supernatural powers and even be integrated into the golden nature. The Foundation Builder, who is also a Tongxuan major cultivator, is the ultimate level of ordinary practitioners. He has his own understanding of the Tao, can start a Foundation Building clan, and can sit in one place. He is an extraordinary consumable and has a chance of breaking out of the dragnet. The next step is to change from understanding the Tao to practicing the Tao, knowing the world and developing your own magical power. The fourth step of practice - [Supernatural Purple Mansion Realm] The Purple Mansion is a real person. The soul is immortal and the true spirit does not fall. Even if the body dies, it can also calmly enter reincarnation and rebuild, and then renew the supernatural power. The fifth step of practice - [Dongxuan Golden elixir realm] The golden elixir is the true king. He lives forever and has the same life span as heaven and earth. He has no worries in life, only calamity and destruction. The sixth step of practice - [Yuan Shen Dao Embryo Realm] ... The above is tentative.

To put it simply, at the first stop, your information density must be high, not too low.

Good writing, good writing and good reading, please read it!

Well, let me tell you, the author, your first picture is too lame and watery. The first picture shows a family of three catching a tripod. This is an adventure. Then the author starts to introduce the family members, oops. No one cares about the status of your three subjects. I can only say that if you have something to say, it will be long, and if you don't say it, it will be short.