Aliens Are Invading? Good Thing I'm Superman

Locomotive died. He completed his own redemption before he died. Now he can be called: a superhero.

Just a little bit, when attacking the people of the motherland, a targeted virus suddenly appeared. There is no cause and effect, and there is no foreshadowing at all. There's not much else to it, and the plot goes smoothly.

Why is Superman Superman? Super strength, super speed. Still the Man of Steel, no, many superpowers have these abilities. So why is he a god on earth?

There is no sense of immersion. It's like watching a stranger do something. The protagonist mainly has no ideas of his own. He is just like an AI labeled a good person by the author. After reading dozens of chapters, I don't want to pay attention to this person. After all, watching a movie is more immersive, right? Ordinary people who have the ability will not enjoy wealth, sex and alcohol. Even people with high-level pursuits will have their own ideas. After saving the world, there is no participation in it. Even the basic information of the enemies in this world is not wanted to know. It feels like a stocking up, but the ordinary protagonist feels uncomfortable after death. The problem is that we don't see how actively the protagonist participates.

It's okay. Counting food and grass, I can see that it doesn't have any poisonous spots. You can just follow the plot. But the protagonist has no sense of presence. The early stage of the black robe is to understand the situation, so it's okay to follow him. A small point of excitement also broke out later. Marvel is purely passive. They know what the plot is and yet they are in a hurry. One second the protagonist finished telling the story, and the next second the villain started taking action. I don't know where you put it in your outline. In fact, you can come to some worlds where the protagonist doesn't know the plot, hide his strength to investigate the world situation, interact with the plot characters by "coincidence", and then make a big difference to the world. Anyway, the protagonist is a good person who can save every world he can. Also, each world goes by very quickly, and I feel like I haven't seen much. Although the main character, Superman, can be mostly considered flat, it depends on how the author writes it.

An inexplicable virus, DC never saw Superman getting infected by the virus.

After looking at the protagonist, I feel that the protagonist has a lot of problems. I feel that there is no goal at all. I feel like I am just drifting along and not knowing what I am going to do. This kind of protagonist is very unlikable. If I really want to watch this kind of thing, why don't I just look in the mirror? Why come to read a novel? Readers will be bored with a character like the protagonist.

It's a very interesting work. It can be seen that the author has some ideas. The design of the subsequent copies is also quite good. The black robe is a bit average at the beginning, but after speeding up it is okay. The author is also more willing to listen to the advice. You can see traces of modifications in the front. It seems that the author still wants to write this book well. Come on!

If you think there is something wrong, just say it directly. If you can change it, you can change it. If you have any reasonable suggestions, I will adopt them.

The idea is good, but the writing and story are a bit poor, the protagonist's presence is a bit low, and the article is a bit sloppy