Nothing Happens Tonight

Maybe there is a story about blood in the book too! Let's see what Maomao can do😍

_(:3∠)_I read Xiaohongshu's comments about blood... I admire the teacher's dedication (?) And I touched it hahh but why is it so cold! ! I didn't win, so I have to show some mercy. Hey, why can't I vote for the monthly vote? I have no choice but to recommend it.

I came here because of the blood post. Hehe 😍😍 Very serious and sophisticated.

😜 Hahahahaha, code first and then read

Xhs Touch it +1! Teacher, it's so cool. I'll check it out when I have time!

Xhs commented on it, but he didn't expect it to get more than 5,000 likes. Maomao's dedication is worthy of praise~

+1 For xhs, looking forward to it

Well, thank you for your support. I am afraid, but I am serious enough about my writing, and I am confident that I can be worthy of the readers. I will not leave anything out of my writing, and all the foreshadowing will be recycled. Please give me some patience. So, welcome to my city

Hold on, Xiaohongshu is here because of his name, hahahahaha

Hold on, come and watch when I finish the group assignment!

From Xiaohongshu😄

The first part of this book is finished. Let's change the taste for the time being. It is a traditional single-line western fantasy book. It is still updated twice a day. If you are interested, please follow the book

From now on, one volume will be updated every day, and it will be updated to the last moment, when he committed suicide and returned to heaven.

I was also attracted by the author's comments in Xiaohongshu. The author is very truth-seeking and pragmatic. In order to understand the smell and color changes of blood loss, he did not hesitate to conduct experiments himself. He is so dedicated. I commented a few days ago saying to come and have a look, now I'm here to fulfill my promise. I have read ten chapters so far. The following content contains spoilers. It is mainly because I am the same author and wanted to share the story. Readers should read with caution. Because I also write novels, generally speaking, my evaluation dimensions are from four perspectives: writing, plot, setting, and logic. The following is purely subjective, just take a look. 1. Writing style: The author's writing is very delicate and has a cinematic feel, with special attention to detail description. The descriptions of the house that the protagonist rents, the clothes of the landlord and others, and the environment of the workplace are all very realistic. 2. Setting: ① World view setting: There is no setting in the first ten chapters. It feels like an urban ghost story. After turning to the later chapters and taking a quick glance, I found that there are monsters. The protagonist can also use peach wood swords and talismans, and there are battle plots. But from what I have seen so far, this setting is very common and has no additional highlights. ②Character setting: The protagonist has a relatively ordinary personality. Currently, I feel that he is embarrassed because he has no money. He is kind, gentle, and unremarkable. As for the supporting characters, there are no supporting characters that have left a deep impression on me so far. 3. Logic: The current logic is self-consistent, without any problems, leaving some foreshadowing (black energy). But I didn't understand it at the beginning of the first chapter. Maybe it's a long-term foreshadowing planned to be revealed later? Or something like a prologue? However, it is not closely connected with the main text, and the transition is abrupt, and it feels like it needs to be handled more skillfully. 4. Plot: Judging from the online novel, the pace of the plot is very slow. It only describes one thing in almost one chapter. The most memorable thing is that the protagonist came to Shenzhen and Hong Kong (Shenzhen and Hong Kong?) To rent an apartment, look for a job, met Azan, Youyou, a food blogger, ate with people in the workplace, and then faintly discovered some weird things. The ability to break chapters needs to be improved, and the suspense setting for the next chapter is not enough. The following is the communication and discussion part. Generally speaking, there is a saying that online articles have three golden chapters. The title of the book, the introduction, and the first three chapters are all for advertising to see if they can retain people. The author gives me the feeling that it doesn't matter how much money the work makes, he just wants to write stories he likes, but he still wants to sign a contract and wants more people to see his work. If this is the case, some compromises are bound to be made. This style is like the author telling an urban ghost story that seems to exist in real life, peeking into the hidden world from the details, and integrating suspenseful ghosts and ordinary people's lives. It's a bit like a physical book-style novel like "The Last Taoist Priest" or "Tomb Robbery Notes", with an unhurried narrative pace. But as an online novel, the content of these ten chapters is too bland. After all, as a story of a hard-working social worker struggling to survive in a big city, we are all like this in reality. Who would want to read it again in a novel. Readers may think, "It's boring, I want to watch the river of blood." I turned to the back and found that there are indeed exciting and tense plots. Yunyou and Azan are also special monsters, but maybe many readers can't stick to that time. I suggest the author fine-tune the introduction and beginning. For the introduction, I recommend reading "The Magician's Handbook". It has a three-line introduction, but it is particularly attractive to read in. The pace at the beginning may need to be sped up a bit, or the suspense left to be engaging enough. For online articles, it is best to have a "crisis-resolution" process in the first three chapters. In addition, in terms of writing style, I hope that the author will continue to maintain it, but at the same time, he can make some choices in detail. There is no need to write everything, and everything will be covered in detail, which means there is no focus. It may be a running account, highlighting valuable and foreshadowing information, environment description, and character description can be deleted appropriately. Also, if you want to play memes, it is recommended to keep up with current events. The memes in the World of Warcraft book are too old and many people may not be able to get them. In terms of setting, it is best to have the characteristics of this book. They are both urban ghost novels. What is special about these monsters compared with other books? The protagonist has a connection with Taoism (mainly because of his grandfather). Are there any other points about his identity that can be explored in depth? What's different about magical powers and cultivation systems? What is the source of demons? How do humans and demons get along? What historical changes has it experienced? If there are special settings, be sure to display them at the front. Only if the world view settings and character settings are eye-catching, will they be more able to retain people. Finally, I suggest that the author just read it. This is just my own experience after writing a novel. However, I am busy with work and have no time and energy to write a new book. In short, I have never signed a contract. I am not a successful person, and what I say may not be right. I am just a fool. I just wish the serious and pragmatic author all the best and get what he wants.