Lingxi Immortal Clan

The basic skills of writing are OK, but the pace is too slow, and the beginning of the chapter doesn't feel engaging! Emotional substitution, environmental substitution. What's the highlight? What should I expect? Let's start by talking about the feelings of practicing and upgrading? Either it starts with a crisis, or it starts with a misunderstanding. Your opening chapter is not interesting, and the visuals and atmosphere are not very strong either! The rhythm of your narrative is very slow. In this case, it is best to bring out the sense of picture and atmosphere and achieve scene substitution. The main character is also too flat. He is tall, short, fat, thin, beautiful, ugly and poor.

A small family is like a 5,000-foot fairy mountain, so rich 🙂🙂 (want to rob it)

There are still people who want to steal heaven, but ants do not want to be submissive. No matter there are billions of sentient beings! Why are the nine great immortal clans superior to all living beings? Why can the nine great immortal clans determine everything for all sentient beings? Why are all sentient beings not able to enjoy the prosperity created by all living beings? Why do the children born to all living beings always have to kneel before the nine great immortal clans! Are they seeking immortality? ! Maybe. But in fact, compared to the distant immortality, what they want is just the living self at the moment! I would like to borrow the building as a courtesy and wish the author a great success in this book. Guest, would you like to come and watch "Nirvana Clan"? Group portraits, big background Family cultivation, power plotting, delicate writing, and emotions of each character Online, non-routine, original story. If you think it is still interesting, please comment and support it.

I don't like this kind of family-style fairy tale where everyone is a living Lei Feng. It's boring.

You can stick to what you write.

Long Aotian is already here before the foundation is established. He immediately kills several late-stage players after establishing the foundation... Why don't you transform into a god immediately?

After a little bit of work, you can be worldly and straightforward, and it requires a process of practice and perfection.