Red Mansion: I, Jia Zhu, Rewrite the Bad Ming Division!

The setting is too unreasonable. The reason why the original book loves Baoyu so much is just because Jia Zhu died early. Jia Zhu is alive and is still a Jinshi according to the author's setting. That is several times better than the dead scholar in the original work. There is no reason for the old woman to still be so partial. In the original work, Baoyu was beaten several times, and the old woman and Mrs. Wang were talking about Jia Zhu.

Jia Zhu is the leader of the fourth generation. As long as he is alive, Jia Baoyu will not have any superiority in treatment and attention. According to the original work of Red Mansion, there is almost a 7-8 or even 10-year age gap between the two. And it has been five years since time travel. Modern people who are familiar with the results of the Red Mansion, and are admitted to the prefecture-level mayor of the Jinshi-led party, do not prepare for anything. They will prepare for everything after returning to Beijing. This is not common sense. Please change it.

I don't understand family, I don't understand politics, I don't understand the world, and I can't write well. Anyone who understands it won't be able to write a book.

The author believes that whether Jia Zhu dies or not will not affect Jia Mu and Mrs. Wang's preference for Baoyu. Regardless of whether it is correct or not, your thinking completely wastes Jia Zhu's starting point, which is no different from the ordinary Jia family's starting point. The protagonist's mentality is that he looks down on this one and that one. He is hard-working in dealing with others, and he can even alienate his own mother, Mrs. Wang. For example, when dealing with the problem of not recognizing the six relatives who can be dealt with by ethnography, they started fighting with Jia Mu, not to mention getting rid of some messy people. This is not to say that the starting point of rectifying the ethos of ethnic studies is wrong. This is not how things are done. Whether it is divided into classes according to grades, or whether it is set up assessments and gradually eliminated, there is a way to explain it. When he came up, he cut off all Xue Pan with a single stroke. Everyone complained about such a trivial matter. I don't know if the author is young or hasn't thought about it carefully. The protagonist, let alone turning enemies into friends, doesn't unite well with his relatives. He treats everyone as enemies. When encountering conflicts, he doesn't give face. He will attack whoever gets in his way. I don't think he wants to save the Jia family, he just comes for revenge.

If the protagonist takes this route, it will be impossible for Yuanchun to become a concubine again! You are a noble person yourself, and then you take the civil service route, and then actually control the military power. The way it is written is that you will be used by the emperor... So, the emperor will let you become a relative of the military commander? ? ? He is also a civil servant, a disciple of the second auxiliary, and he comes from a distinguished family, and then he adds a relative to control the military power of the capital? ? ? Is it possible? You also secretly cultivate your own espionage organization. If you are rich, whether the emperor will live or not will depend on your face... Don't you think it's ridiculous? ? ? There is more! The protagonist is already on the rise, shouldn't he be attracted by all parties? Because you are so awesome, how convenient! I must not hurry up and marry your sister so that you can be my helper! One person is involved in the civil service group and the noble group, not to mention the military power! It's simply the first rebel dragon force

The best thing written in this book is the setting of the secret guard. Other Red Mansions novels do not have this setting. The two princes still have military power, so don't they have some dead soldiers who are doing things secretly? Even if the previous generation has been dead for decades, there are no secret guards left? I don't quite believe it, at least as mentioned in this book, there will be old people or foundation left behind.

If you open the novel of the Three Kingdoms in the future, can you cut the story of the girl Mrs. Du and the girl Mrs. Zou + the girl Mrs. Bian and the girl Mrs. Yin? It will easily attract the interest of reading the novel.

If you open a novel about the Three Kingdoms in the future and select all the beauties to read it, it will easily attract the interest of reading the novel. Many historical novels with many beauties are all about reading and collecting the beauties.

Will you start reading novels about the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin in the future?

I saw Jia Zhu training soldiers, and then Yuanchun was granted the title of concubine... It was very exciting! In politics, it was possible to win over Wu Xun during the founding of the People's Republic of China! Because you have military power, the founder of the country can't suppress it, but you don't want to kill too many heroes, so you get married! But it has been several generations, and it must be the other way around now. If we want to suppress Wu Xun, how can we still let you train soldiers and marry your sister at the same time? Are you afraid that the emperor's surname is not Jia? ? ? The emperor himself is the greatest martial artist... Your family is all useless, so it's okay to marry a concubine, because you can't affect the inheritance of the throne! You have soldiers, are you afraid that you won't participate?

The timelines don't even match up! At what age did Daiyu enter Rongguo Mansion? It seems that Jia Zhu died at that time and was never seen! Moreover, Xue Baochai has already entered Beijing, so it's not right! Jia Lian played harder than these sisters and couldn't play together. Wang Xifeng and Jia Zhen even played together when they were young! Tell us how old Jia Lian is? Jia Zhu is definitely older than Jia Lian... Jia Lan is obviously the eldest grandson of the second son Jia Zheng!

There are too many women's scenes, it's disgusting, it's Daiyu and Baochai, and the protagonist and the two have to be more than ten years apart!

The protagonist is assigned a character, Quan Rong Guofu, who can be said to have the most potential, but it is the same as not being assigned. Except for you, there is almost no difference, and there is also a lot of content derived from fan fiction, haha

After reading the first few chapters of the episode, the writing is still too immature. It's not that I can't accept a female supporting role like Sister You quickly, but the writing is too rough. I'll give it a try.

I feel like it's taking the route of fighting for hegemony, and the logic is still self-consistent at the moment, so it's okay.

Set Jia Rong to resist, which is normal. But doesn't Jia Rong like Qin? ? After seeing Qin sleeping with the male protagonist, he still asked Qin, what would Qin do if the male protagonist was like Jia Zhen? This is a bit contradictory. According to what was said before, the reason for Jia Rong's resistance was Jia Zhen's domination of Qin Keqing. If he had feelings for Qin, then he would not and should not let Qin Keqing go to bed with the male protagonist. If there is no emotion, then Jia Zhen will take possession of her, and there is no need for him to resist.

Compared with other Red Mansion novels, it is excellent. Come on, author. I will see if there are any double monthly votes at the end of the month. I will vote for you all, although I skipped reading some chapters 🙂

It's really a bit handicapped, it makes my brain hurt to look at it! This is the starting point! This is not a website with many mindless and cool articles!

Since breeding pigs cause abortion, let's take in Grandma Liu too.