Water Margin: a Certain Person Is Zhu Biao

The writing and ideas are great! The starting point is the Water Margin that is worth reading. But sometimes the writing style of the same article/paragraph jumps back and forth between modern and Water Margin styles, which looks a bit fragmented. The antique text, especially the first-person narration, is a bit stiff and rigid, lacking character characteristics. Also, Liang Siqi's characterization and plot are too cliche and classic. I hope they can be updated or revised or reduced. Overall highly recommended!

There are really too many bullshit things that ruin the whole story. I feel like the protagonist is quite useless. It makes people tired and has no motivation to follow. The rhythm of the plot is a mess. Catch the big and let the little know? Write less about trivial things? After dozens of chapters, the protagonist is doing nothing but getting good grades.

The writing is quite good, the pace is a bit fast, and it is a rare good article. There is another small question. Is it really appropriate for Pang Qiutang to call his official savior the Zhu family boy? Regardless of status, kindness, or even politeness, this name should not be used multiple times in any aspect.

There is indeed something remarkable about this book , what moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially after hearing that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Sect, he resolutely broke up with Jun Zijian. Yue Buqun made me cry when he wandered around the world. Linghu Chong participated in the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father. Dong Zhuo transformed into a master and destroyed the Tiandihui and Honghuahui and other forces in one fell swoop. King Jinlun defended Xiangyang righteously, and Houyi shot the bright moon. There are also Xiao Longnu and Mai Sakurajima dancing together in the Pure Land, Zhao Min and Hyuga Hinata singing "Northeasterners are all living thunder fronts", and finally U'S and the 101 Rockets entered Kanto together. But I still think the scene in Grandma Liu's Fengxueshan Temple is the most classic As for the ones that are more relevant to literature, they are Dream of the Red Chamber written by Cao Cao and Qianlong and "Shui Tiao Ge Tou" written by Du Fu

You have a tight rhythm, but you are tired of watching all the bullshit. You have to step in every bullshit. If you step on the shit before it is clean, you will step on it again.

I could still watch it at the beginning, but recently the plot has started to become watery, and I can tolerate it. My writing has gotten worse and worse in recent days. I suspect it was assisted by AI. It appears a few times in each chapter but nothing more. These days, for any book that appears a few times in each chapter but is just right, there is no need to expect quality.

There are only six chapters in total, just about Wu Er and Fengxue Mountain Temple. Isn't it too hasty? In addition, don't open too many plug-ins, as they may crash easily. Too many novels of the same type have too many plug-ins that are so outrageous that they won't be able to write them in the end.

There were so many things going on along the way, it was okay once or twice, everything was conflicting in chapter and chapter, Chai Jin in the beginning, and then Wu Songlin rushed to say nothing. Later, there was a city lockdown, bandits, gangsters in the hotel, and staying in an inn was a trap. Who can bear it when writing like this?

There are only 18 chapters in total, so many heroes appear? It's too fast. Too fast is not a good thing, and too slow is not good either. The author needs to control it well.

I'm so tired from watching, pig's feet can't take a break for a moment, I'm exhausted

I wish that there is really no need to get rid of such bullshit things as brothers fighting over property and grabbing horses in the village. It's tiring to watch! Wouldn't it be better to calm down and develop a wave to add some excitement? The plot development must also have its ups and downs

It was watery at the beginning and the plot was too dragging.

After reading the comments, they all say that there are so many bullshit, which means it is really not good.

What's exciting is what you can't guess, 👍

181-145, A rib, at least 180

The protagonist is never idle for a moment, either looking for trouble or on the way to it.

There is actually Yue Fei? Was there Yue Fei during the Northern Song Dynasty? Yue Fei is about the same age as Zhao Gou!

I'm also writing about Water Margin, but the traffic is so bad right now that I can't write in the top five categories, and I feel like no one is reading it…

The blessings are doubled and the happiness is more than a little bit!

The system does not have a strong sense of presence, and it is rare to play this theme without getting into trouble. It would be better if you update more frequently.

Only about 50 chapters have been written. How many women have been included? The rhythm will collapse in the mid-term.

The more I read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. It pretends to be profound. Since it is about people from later generations traveling through the Water Margin, it must be written in a cool way, but it is not that cool. It has to be a serious literary youth. It makes you feel uncomfortable and sick when you kill someone. How can your grades be good?