Do You Know: I Am Qi Heng

When reading a book, you are not afraid that the plot will be bad, but you are afraid that you will leave a hole and not write it.

Why is Qi Heng still so weak, no different from the TV series in front of his mother, the princess?

What's the difference between it and the original work?

Weak before wearing it, still weak after wearing it, you wore it in vain

So far, so good. However, I have to say no. The marriage between Ming Lan and He Hongwen is very likely to happen. Although there is a vague explanation in the back that Lan has some affection for Qi Heng, I am still worried about the three things that the fandom has to accept. Hua Lan continues to marry Yuan Wenshao, Ru Lan continues to marry Wen Yanjing, and Minglan randomly chooses an original drama character to match her. Forget the first two, but for the third one, it is disgusting to write a random match by a fan. I hope the author will not write like this.

From the very beginning, the author blamed Xiao Qin for Bai's death, in order to get Gu Tingye to fight her to avenge his mother's murder. Don't you think it's too ridiculous! First of all, judging a person's cause of death from a legal perspective, the direct cause of Bai's death was a confrontation with Gu Yankai, which resulted in fetal dystocia and two deaths. Gu Yankai was the first responsible person. He knew that Bai was very pregnant and still argued with her. Secondly, the reason for their quarrel was that Bai knew the truth about her marriage because the Gu family was short of money and coveted her dowry. They divorced their wives and forced Da Qin to death. Bai thought of the consequences she received in this family. The Gu family was the source of this tragedy and they were considered secondary culprits. In the end, because of unwillingness and resentment, Xiao Qin instigated Da Lang to secretly instigate a relationship with Bai. This did not harm Bai. As for letting Bai hear the truth, regardless of whether it was a conspiracy or not, she only stated one thing and was not considered a murderer from a legal and moral perspective. So how could Gu Tingye's revenge for his mother be blamed on Xiao Qin! The Xiao Qin family is adding fuel to the flames. The biggest culprits who have harmed the Bai family are the Gu family. Revenge should come from the Gu family first. If Gu Yankai had not been so indifferent to the Bai family, this tragedy would not have happened. To avenge his mother, he does not hate the real culprit but seeks out the one who is least responsible. It is really ridiculous! Gu Tingye could hate Xiao Qin for flattering him, deceiving him, and scheming against him, but the person he should hate most for his mother's death was the Gu family. I understand that the author wants Gu Tingye to fight Xiao Qin, but this is the wrong starting point. Like in the TV series, Gu Tingye had already given up on Xiao Qin when he knew that Xiao Qin wanted to kill him, but he couldn't do anything to Xiao Qin out of etiquette, so he did not take the initiative to deal with Xiao Qin. He could only fight back when Xiao Qin plotted against him. The author wanted Gu Tingye to fight from this aspect. After knowing the truth about the killing, Gu Tingye began to be wary of his stepmother and brothers. At the same time, he worked hard to plan for the future for the sake of the future of his children. In the process, he battled wits and courage with the Xiao Qin family. Isn't this more reasonable than avenging his mother! Under the environment of feudal etiquette, a blood relative killed his mother. Gu Tingye could not avenge his mother directly. Moreover, he also respected and loved his father. He could not take violent revenge in public or private affairs. At most, he would question his biological father, and then the father and son would be alienated. The TV series is also filmed in this way, which is only reasonable. Gu Tingye insists on building a monument for her mother in the Gu family ancestral hall just to hurt the face of the Gu family. Ancient people valued the ancestral family law in the ancestral hall, but the Gu family always despises the Bai family and is unwilling to admit the existence of the Bai family to the outside world. Gu Tingye just wants to seek justice for her mother by stepping on what they value! Really, every time I watch the author use his biological mother's hatred to make Gu Tingye hate Xiao Qin, I feel that he is trying to trick his wits. The TV series is obviously very good, but the author seems to waste the ingredients when he adapts it. It makes me feel uncomfortable watching it.

If there was a normal woman in front of the palace, Qi Heng's mother, the old woman, should have died, but her mother did not die. She pretended to be crazy and acted stupid for a while and continued to live. When Qi Guogong only had one son, Qi Heng couldn't even protect him with a servant. What kind of man was he? Don't always say that filial piety governs the world. When there is only one son, Qi Heng's mother intends to suppress Qi Huan in the name of unfilial piety. That's when this guy dies. Qi Guogong (I feel that this old guy is quite willing to compromise, but the result of compromise is that an old woman wants to threaten her son's future). If he doesn't want to cut off his children and grandchildren, do you know that the so-called princess can die suddenly at any time?

The characters have no sense of life, and the author's subjective consciousness is too obvious. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters seem to be manipulated and too involved in the author's personal emotions and cognition. The characters in the novel have no sense of three-dimensionality and imagination, and the overall world view has not been established. It does not make people feel that this parallel time and space exists, which is quite a failure in shaping. Moreover, do you know that fan fiction has never mentioned the original drama as frequently as this one, causing readers to be very disconnected and have a poor sense of immersion?

Stay Claw

It's a very good novel. At present, the novel has not entered a major conflict point and is still laying the groundwork. I hope the author will work hard.