Marvel: Wonka's Chocolate Factory

The subject matter and creativity are quite good, but the identity and background designed by the author for the protagonist, and the fact that Black Braised Egg can do these things in the early stage, I can only say that it is pure daydreaming. The protagonist can kill him even if he farts, and he can even make him angry.

Complain about it. At the beginning, there were big chaebols and five major grain merchants, but a transport ship was robbed and the stock market was cut in half? Will it lead to bankruptcy if we make any big moves?

"The elderly pirate with a bit of a brain twitch and extreme mood swings, suspected of schizophrenia, fantasizes about Blue Star and Willy Wonka, travels back to the daily life of Marvel's Invincible to cause trouble"

They have become a big capital and they actually let Malizhi Fakeer find out.

You underestimate the capitalists too much. Even the president can ask him to replace his power. Let S. H. I. E. L. D. Investigate

It's a pity that there are indeed bright spots, but the pirate flavor is too strong. The original owner of Blue Star, especially Willy Wonka, is just a background setting with no flavor at all. In other words, he is an elderly pirate with a bit of a brain twitch and extreme mood swings, who is suspected of being schizophrenic and imagines Blue Star and Willy Wonka traveling back to the daily life of Marvel's Invincible to cause trouble.

Golden Three has a psychotic protagonist.

In less than ten chapters, he released the person who threatened him, what about Marvel! I hope to see more serious works next time

After reading Chapter 12, I suspected that it was written by a female author. How could a big capitalist with extraordinary power and countless dead men be shitted on his head by a black braised egg? ? ? ? ? ?

Is this the performance of the super trust monopoly giant described? The five major grain merchants simultaneously dominate the world's chocolate market. All 16-year-olds have eaten your chocolate. If you say anything, you will have to step down, because you can just beat the iron fist of Roosevelt, the trust blaster.

He's so awesome, he's a eunuch, he's sixty or seventy years old, but in the end, he didn't even give birth to a barbecued pork, you don't pretend to understand even though you're so awesome, in reality, he's also a loser.

The creativity is good, the writing is average, and I like to disgust people.

The starting point of the theme is good, and the combat power is too high, which is not a big problem, but the plot is too fast and the SHIELD is pushed away from the beginning. The universe has only been in the universe for a few chapters. How to write next? This is a popular American comic book. In fact, the plots are all concentrated on the earth. The alien plot has a small audience and not many people like it. This book is hopeless.

As the title states, the content is actually good at the beginning, but when I finished SHIELD so quickly, I felt that there was nothing to write about later, and there was no desire to explore the subsequent plot. I hope the author will practice more here, and the next book can be better.

Are you keeping Nick Fury so that he can be fed at all times🪨? You can put a bounty on him and kill him all over the place. You can just add money to replace him. He has to be disgusting.

In fact, I think the writing is okay, but the main character is Willy Wonka or a pirate, and the character development is weird.

Is he the brother of Charlie Wonka? The Wonka family opened chocolate factories to all the worlds 😄

Willy Wonka🙂

Go back and update. Don't cut the Harry Potter copy anymore.

Your introduction is quite interesting, I hope you won't cut it