Simultaneous Time Travel: Everyone Is in a Near-Death State at the Beginning

He is really awesome. He shared the strength of Calabash Baby, but was beaten away by Guo Jing. He is really awesome. I would like to write a review of the same thing.

I don't understand, I can't understand. We have a shared space, but we still have to worship Guo Jing as our teacher and be friends with Yang Guo? Not to mention that you are a generation shorter, what can Guo Jing teach you? Because of the previous TV series, I think most people hate Guo Fu. It has nothing to do with appearance, only character and personality. Having such a powerful golden finger, and pretending to be taught by gods, this is such a lousy lie, it is embarrassing for us readers. One more thing, if you have new parents after time travel, they are just familiar strangers. You may give them more care out of guilt and compensation, but you cannot really regard them as your parents.

There was still something to behold in Calabash World, but the world collapsed immediately. The starting point is so high, I never thought about lowering my head. If there is no cheat, I will be submissive. If I cheat, I will still be submissive. I didn't buy this cheat for nothing. The cheat needs to be developed. I am still such a coward for cheating. Either you have fun all the way, or you suppress it first and then improve it. Look at what you write.

It feels like Superman is learning Wing Chun and Pangu is playing basketball 🥵

The first 6 chapters all felt good, except for eight of the seven gourd boys who were a little out of character 🙂. In Chapter 7, I frowned when I saw the protagonist insisting on getting close to Yang Guo. I thought he wanted to accept him as his younger brother, but actually he wanted to take the opportunity to apprentice with Guo Jing? Looking at the author's reply, is it to occupy the Magpie's Nest and the Beggar's Gang? It's a bit poisonous. Like other readers said, it's better to start from scratch. The author takes the ancient rebellion a bit for granted. The world of kings, kings, ministers, fathers and sons has great resistance. In addition, in terms of plot, when I saw the part about Taoist priest Qianzuru, I felt it was very bland. It was a content that the gods are used to writing, and it was not interesting.

The writing is bad, the plot is bad and the writing is boring.

Junior high school students are starting to write novels, it's amazing👍

Why did the protagonist rebel in the vulture version? It's not that it can't be built, but that there will be 10 more years until the end of the Song Dynasty. When the golden finger arrives, I can practice cultivation and develop after closing the door for a while and I will soon be able to stop eating beef. The gourd baby or other people can jump to protect my earth no matter what the opportunity is. And the protagonist rebels against the original protagonist, Guo Jing, Huang Rong, what's going on with the Beggar Clan? Is it because you don't kneel down if you don't want to please them, or a thunderbolt will directly kill them, or is it because the opponent has the aura of the protagonist and is invincible? As a protagonist with a good background, there is no need to go to a group of miscellaneous beggars for basic cards such as family power, childbirth, etc. Even if there are martial arts factors included, most of the beggars are old, weak, sick and disabled. How many usable soldiers can you gather? Hands The cohesion of the beggar gang is not to mention the mob, but it is definitely a crotch pull. A group of weak beggars from the Song Dynasty are not soldiers of the God Emperor. There are one hundred and eighty interstellar warriors in them. Their allegiance is tantamount to rebellion. They will definitely succeed in defeating the Song Dynasty and Mongolia to unify the world. Also, if you want the Beggar Clan as your subordinate, why should you study under Guo Jing? Isn't the leader of the Beggar Clan Huang Rong? As the leader's wife and a hero, people respect Guo, but it doesn't mean that you become the Beggar Clan itself when you become Guo Jing's disciple. This relationship is several generations apart. He is Cheng Yang Guo's brother, and he is dealing with Guo Jing and Huang Rong. If he has time, he can learn some poisons from his brothers in the ancient dragon world, and ask a few old craftsmen at home to knead some gunpowder. Then he can just throw explosive packets, combine the poisons to do biochemistry, and add magical assassinations. Killing hundreds of Mongolian troops in one day is a lock of loyalty. When the plot point of the demise of the Song Dynasty is reached, you can give him a clear picture. The protagonist feels like a different kind of Murong Fu. If you want to rebel and become emperor, shouldn't you do something related to it? What the hell is it to go to the Jianghu and rely on Jianghu people to rebel? And it's still not as good as the arena in the Tianlong era

The writing is so bad, I can't stand it.

The author is a female reviewer, so learn to be a man!

Would you rather fight in the comment area than change the plot? Haji author, you are not written by AI and can't change it?

This is a book where memory and ability are shared, but strength is not shared, and the ability will be localized, just like the chakra in Naruto is incorporated into the internal power of martial arts, and the characteristics of chakra are integrated into it. Strength will not be shared, and strength will not be shared! !

Don't you usually read novels?

When I saw the scene with Guo Jing and Huang Rong, no elementary school student could write such a plot.

Author, Calabash Wags have no magic power, they use magical powers similar to supernatural powers, and the female ghosts under the Dryad in the trilogy movie did not use magic to seduce mortals. In ancient times, a proactive beauty did not need magic to add bonuses! Wow! The scene where Nie Xiaoqian and Ning Caichen are together is no different from the original work, just a simplified version!

I don't ask you to write anything new. You just need to copy a million words and write it out! If you have five books, you can't prove that you can become a god once. You can just copy out the results and see! I'm not trying to knock you. The guy next door who specializes in driving is more interesting than you are now.

The biggest poisonous point of Tongchuanliu is that the memory strength is not shared. You have already accounted for half of the strength here. And are you serious about the introduction? The painting style of Naruto and other worlds really don't match, right? Even Phoenix Mocking Phoenix is ​​mainly based on Japanese comics and is based on a few mythological worlds. If you are more nationalistic and have a Naruto, there won't be many people to talk about it.

You, a person with the magical power of Calabash Baby, can completely dominate everything in Jin Yong's martial arts. What can you gain by becoming a disciple of Guo Jing? It's useless at all. You have to consider Guo Jing's ideas in everything you do, and Guo Jing also has a bunch of elders. You also have to think about it. What is the natural legal principle for you to be lower than them?

I'm not the author. What did you write? The protagonist is set to be so invincible. You wouldn't let him create a few characters from other worlds and then create stories with the characters in the current world. You should write slowly and treat it as a new protagonist. Let the protagonist watch and have fun behind the scenes and become a fun person. What is this?

Everyone can propose the world they want to see, which can also be designed in advance to better grasp the direction of the subsequent plot. Of course, if you are not satisfied with what you wrote, feel free to comment. I will try my best not to make the same mistakes in the subsequent plots. I can only say that I will work hard and keep doing it.

Take the time to update, otherwise there will be no one.

I don't understand, why do you want to become a disciple of Guo Jing?

Inexplicably, they were made into eight gourd dolls. What a fuss?

Author, your writing is so invincible, and you can clear a dungeon too quickly. It feels like a running account. I feel like I could write some behind-the-scenes stories to give the original characters some opportunities in other worlds, and make this world more exciting.

The first world is super beautiful, really

I remember that Lao Liu was an invisible and virtual dog 🙂

Not bad, you can skip watching some worlds you don't like.

It's the same as turning on double speed. You can watch it, but it's not suitable for reading.

I'm not the author. Are you just writing an outline here? It's just a running account, from Armor Warrior to now, especially Zhe Tian Dou Po. You have a copy of these. What are you doing?