Save and Save the Serf Girl

Some thoughts about the book. First of all, I will definitely continue to write. Although there are very few readers and the results are not ideal, I know very well that I am just a newbie who doesn't understand anything. I wrote it myself because I couldn't find a book I liked. The second internal investment passed unexpectedly, so I am considered a lucky person. Before posting this post, I just finished talking with the editor in charge of me, and he helped me clear up a lot of my doubts, so I came here to express my thoughts. Vann's story wasn't engaging, and I felt it was my outline that was the problem. I have just become an author, but I have forgotten my identity as a reader, and my mind is full of foreshadowing. This is actually wrong. The structure will be messed up and the impression will be worse. Thank you for your criticism and correction. After this, I will keep writing, read more books and practice. If I write poorly, please criticize me. Secondly, regarding updates, after being encouraged by the editor, I feel that I have a lot of motivation again. Now the daily code speed is 6,000+less than 10,000, so it is still about two chapters a day. You don't have to worry about me asking for leave 😊. Finally, Rome was not built in a day, not to mention I was not born in Rome, so I have to work harder on myself!

The writing is good, the minor flaws are innocuous, and the setting is OK. I haven't recommended it to you yet, otherwise the score shouldn't be so bad. Come on, author.

The author's perseverance alone warrants support.