Gou Escapes the Kill Line in the NBA Giants

There is too much inner drama. Is this someone who has traveled through time? How is it different from the original one? And you entered the police station without doing anything? It's been more than 20 chapters and I haven't played in the NCAA yet! How many more will you write when you get into the team? Too inky. Originally your outline was quite good. Points, poor people. Entering the NBA changed his life against the odds. But when you write it like this, it's a bit restrictive to the readers.

Even if I jump to watch it, I can't stand it anymore. It's like a hysterical person talking nonsense.

Wouldn't it be nice to jump directly to the NCCA and win the championship...

It would be unreasonable for you not to rush to the street. The main line has not been cut yet. Are you writing basketball articles or urban articles? The protagonist is a time traveler, but he looks like a native and is still a fool who doesn't understand the world. System, I don't know what I'm writing, I'm just talking nonsense.

How should I put it? I was ready to run away after reading Chapter 15. I just felt aggrieved and bitter. I feel that reading novels is all about pursuing pleasure. No matter whether you have no brain or a brain, I don't care about the author's writing. The author wants to make money. I feel that this book can be cut. If the author doesn't care about money and wasting his time, then it doesn't matter.

Overall, this novel seems to have nothing to do with playing basketball. The only superficial content of your basketball game is that you are a Chinese and live in the United States. Anyway, it was like this for the first 40 or so pictures. And the content is also a bit vulgar.

The introduction is a magical book. I clicked in and read a few chapters. The setting is rubbish and I have no interest in continuing at all.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but I really can't stand it.

I only entered the NBA after Chapter 100. I've practiced at this level.

Why don't you start writing from birth?

It would be understandable if it was written by a new author.

It's 2026, and it's better to add some physical skills. Hey, I abandoned the book when I saw the first chapter.

The writing is very suitable to my taste. Come on, I will save it and read it.

The NCAA only allowed players to accept endorsements in 21 years. Didn't you check the information before writing?