American Comics: Traveling Through Dior and Being Adopted by the Wayne Family

DC really doesn't like Batman and doesn't like this dark style at all. There is no way. At that time, Superman was dragged into the trap 🤭. Most of the Superman who read the novel was too pressured to fight and didn't want to pursue it. Otherwise, it was dark as it was written. Yun DC expressed doubts about whether the world view of this comic is so dark?

Even if there are rampant criminals in Gotham, statistics show that public security is really good, even better than the prototype. If you give it to Americans, at least half of them will think that Gotham has good public security.

Trivia: Gotham City is already the easiest city to live in in America. There is really water in the firefighting facilities, and Bateman will give you real bail. Even if you cry on the road in the middle of the night that you have no job, a Bateman will give you a suit and an interview certificate from Bateman Company.

After reading the first three chapters, the writing is okay, but there are some flaws in the character design and plot design, such as: 1. The protagonist is a time traveler, and the setting is that his personality is exactly the same as Dio. What does the protagonist think about in the first three chapters, and kill the mastermind who controls him? Uncover Batman's heart and seize Batman's family property... It's difficult for me to write like this, because I just want to become stronger. If I were a time traveler, I would have a system, and family property wouldn't matter. Batman's heart doesn't care at all, I just care. Strength 2. The protagonist is set to know the plot, but the protagonist's behavior pattern is written according to the fact that he does not know the plot. When I read it, I will have some contradictions and feelings of fragmentation. After reading these three chapters, give me a feeling that the first draft of this book is based on the original character of Dior. The more I wrote it, the more I wrote it, but because the character writing was not restored enough, I was afraid it would not be reasonable enough, or I wanted to enhance the reader's sense of involvement, so I added the setting of a time traveler and someone who knows the plot, so it reads a bit fragmented, like one layer covering another layer, but the integration is not perfect.

It was quite fun before, but now it's in the palm of Batman's hands. He has done everything, but Gotham has not changed. It's still Batman fighting🤡. As for Dio? Not to mention, anyone can take advantage of it

I have already invested in it, because there are very few writing about stand-ins and American comics, so this one is pretty good. Stand-in abilities such as World Feeling are not necessary now, just a few seconds, and Ripple Qigong. Under the DC power system, stand-in abilities are really not invincible. The main thing is that having world dio makes you feel good. You can use the world to move people down the stairs. Personally, I came to see the protagonist's coquettish stance, invincible stand-in ability, and wonderful metaphors. For detectives and other cases, it's almost enough, just like Jotaro would dive into the sewer and block the dio. It's mainly about the feeling. As for reasoning and other things, just having a feeling is enough. Complete evidence is not required. It makes the protagonist look stupid. Although it is interesting to watch the battles in Jojo, it is unreasonable to really care about many aspects.

The protagonist is set up as a systematic time traveler but the reading does not feel like a time traveler Thinking about raising family property, breaking Batman's heart, etc. It feels very It feels like what Dio did when he was at Da Qiao's house It would be better if the setting is Jojo's Dio who time travels over. Pure time travellers have read American comics and come here to do the same things as Dio. It feels weird.

He is 195 centimeters tall and weighs only 90kg. Author, do you want to read what you wrote? Even if you say he is a bamboo pole, you will lift him up.

One? Many? None? Do not return to default stock trading

I haven't read this book yet. I asked Shen Nong if the Wayne couple were stabbed to death by Dio.

Could you please not use the Bruce photo from the TV series? . . Acting like a fool

The plot progresses too quickly, and many places that could obviously be expanded upon are omitted. Reading feels like chewing dry compressed food - can you put some water in it, bro?

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha, finally found the resource!

Surprisingly, it was very well written. It's great for those who like Jojo and DC. I just don't want to write so much about my childhood.

Is the protagonist Dio Beno or a time traveler who has acquired the identity of Dio?

If you have any comments after reading the book, you can leave a message under this post.

The current version of Gotham has not been updated yet, so JOJO has a little more ability. When the later version is updated, I plan to arrange some localization capabilities for the protagonist. If you have anything you want to see, you can leave a message and I will adopt it as appropriate. If you like it highly, you may write it, but don't be too outrageous.

I will read other books to support you

It's really good, you can take a look

Fathers-in-law, let's do some catch-up reading! ! ! ! ! ! If you want to PK, if you pass the PK, I will update the list with 10,000 more words! ! ! ! !

I would like to ask, when did I write the plot of adulthood later? This early stage plot about children is a foreshadowing that I don't feel like. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 108, it is still a story about childhood.

This book is very good. Why is no one reading it? There are only dozens of comments in the book review section.

Another book to keep alive,,,,,

It's interesting, and it's very well-written. Master ➕dio. This feeling of being both an enemy and a brother is a bit nice. Later on, we got together. I think dio is one of Batman's trump cards.

Don't wait, the author has already cut it

If I eat the recommendation, I will definitely guarantee a minimum of 10,000 words a day after it is put on the shelves. I am not a painter, 1w words are really easy for me. I really don't want to cut the book! So I beg to read it! Orz

This book is good at the beginning, but boring in the middle.

I thought I traveled through time and became Ultraman Tiga 🙂

Love it. Please watch more.

What's wrong? ? . A eunuch. . ?