The Green Plum Is on the Left, the Sky Is Falling on the Right

I personally think that the author's previous life setting will definitely be a hit. The author wrote this kind of dual heroine (Qingmei + Tiansheng), but the author missed the setting and even wrote that Qingmei got married and had children in her previous life. Reply to the author's first comment: It is said that the events in the past life have nothing to do with the main plot after rebirth. Cutting + sugar will be given out later + knife will not be given out. So what does the author mean by writing that this past life is shocking? Reply to the second comment: The rebirth novel is indeed to make up for regrets. There are indeed many plots about missing Bai Yueguang, but look at the normal author who would write about the heroine's childhood sweetheart Bai Yueguang having a child in her previous life. Let me put it this way, as long as an author writes it, he will be prepared to be scolded. Let's talk about the Divorce Counterattack System. I haven't read it yet, but I did read it. The first chapter is also about the protagonist's marriage, not Qingmei's marriage. I would like to add that the author wrote about Tiansheng to death, but he also wanted to write about Qingmei getting married and having children. You might as well write everything to death. I really don't understand why anyone would read this novel when the author's introduction has been written like this.

There is no need for the author to write like this. There was also a novel before that was about twin lives (both male and female protagonists were reborn). The female protagonist also had a husband in her previous life, but ended up being dumped. She didn't even sign a contract. There is no need to fight the market.

14 Chapters currently. Qingmei has a good reading experience, so I won't say too much about the good ones, but I will mainly talk about my feelings. Qingmei is 16 years old and undefended, but she knows those places not to touch... Maybe this is the true situation of childhood sweethearts? I don't understand, I have no childhood memories, and I don't talk nonsense. The mentality of the male protagonist is more realistic, without the smell of a greasy uncle. For a social animal, this mentality is more reasonable. At present, I look more like a teenager who knows what will happen more than ten years in the future (actually there are only 14 chapters, I can't tell,) The appearance of Tiansheng was weird to me, and it didn't have any sense of picture. Maybe this kind of thing is not easy to imagine. There is also another post that reflects the issue of past life experience (I don't mind it personally). If the author wants to pursue achievements, it is best to change it. The environment is like this There are relatively few things in Chapter 14. I am not a very professional person and can't give very constructive suggestions. I just think that before you write a book and get results, you need to think more. I hope you can write an attractive enough story.

The clear spring reflects the looseness, and I don't know how many thousands of years it has passed. The cold moon shakes the clear waves and streams of light into the windows. This is a long chant in the air, how deeply I miss you. Seeing the safe way without cause makes people's hearts full of joy and sorrow. It expresses the author's deep longing for his friend (bosom friend), as well as his confusion and melancholy that his bosom friend is hard to find and that we have no chance to get together.

You have to have regrets and have a sense of reality, hehehe, he's dead

Your arrangement for Qingmei to marry someone else and have children in her previous life is a typical example of past life thunder.