Was It Me in the Old Days?

Advantages: The setting is good, the characterization is barely passable Disadvantages: The writing is not good, the plot is too stiff, it is like the setting is a framework, and what you have to do is to fill in the plot. The plot is too stiff and classic. Old readers can take a quick glance, but in this case, the author's writing style is very problematic, and it is already a bit unreadable.

I am an ordinary person, and there are many things that I cannot understand, so I have withdrawn.

But can An Yingai stop writing emotional dramas? It looks very funny and uncomfortable, and I am flirting with a virtual code. If I can be resurrected, I will resurrect it quickly, otherwise I will keep writing an AI that will look bad.

That female researcher feels superfluous

The beginning feels amazing, but I can't walk as soon as I see a woman, which is a failure. It's okay to cut it, but you won't know how to write it later anyway. You can open a new book and imitate the style of the historical book without any female manipulation.

If it had been released ten years or even five years earlier, the popularity would probably have been even higher. This beginning would have the same flavor as back then. But nowadays, this set may not be popular, and it is somewhat untimely.

If the grass jelly seedlings can maintain their current level in the future, they will be worthy of becoming emperors. The only hesitation is that I feel that this setting will not be easy to write later. There is a risk of eunuchs, especially if you look at the author's homepage. Based on my many years of reading experience, the current setting of the protagonist should be considered "semi-" invincible, and there are no "restrictions from the author" itself. It is difficult to write a long story like this. Whatever problems you encounter can be solved by the power of invincibility. If you continue to complain, you will be scolded that the protagonist is really stupid. At present, the only hooks and foreshadowing are the truth of the world and the mystery of the protagonist's life experience, but judging from the current combat power of the protagonist, it feels very difficult to be challenging. Unless you forcefully arrange a stronger person, the risk of doing so is also very high. It must be able to cause obstacles, but it must not make the protagonist too frustrated. After all, the strong character has been established in the front. It is impossible to write daily prose when the setting and tone have already been figured out, and writing about daily life will only be considered to be superficial. Or later on, he could become a savior, farm and manage the world, and lead the current world to fight against crazy pollution, etc., But it didn't feel easy to write. In the early stage, he was still dealing with ordinary people, but the span in the later stage is so big... Of course, the above is just my imagination. I just hope that I can stabilize myself and not be a eunuch. I really feel that this book is quite interesting.

The time in the world where the protagonist lives is actually only one second, but it is infinitely extended by a force. Time and space are integrated. If time is abnormal, space must also be abnormal.

The writing is good, but lv1 makes people afraid of eunuchs

It's just that the descriptions in some places are too shallow, and in some places there are too many descriptions, but Liangcao is the starting point.

It feels like what Cthulhu cultivates is unknowable madness, because it is difficult to control one's own reason when cultivating this unknowable madness, so the body must always be asleep, or directly make people lose their minds. The solution is to be better than him and don't be confused by interference.

What I don't like is An Ying's AI. The plot is a bit too early.

I just voted for a monthly ticket and it turned out that I was a eunuch.

Have you ever been an evil god? I wrote some things randomly, taking it for granted.

Given a 7-month pass

The more I write, the more bored I become, that's normal.

Maybe it's okay, let's put it on the bookshelf first