Tokyo: My Girlfriend Is a Chess Master

Is the author Ye Ye 5? Why is he so down? The world champion of Go in the AI ​​era is inextricably linked with a person who can't even determine the level before the AI ​​era. It seems that the only difference between them is certain AI moves and mentality. Can you tell the difference between the two?

When I first read Chapter 30, I was shocked. The communication between the male and female protagonists was so natural and comfortable. Who is this extraterrestrial demon?

Why isn't my girlfriend Ke Jie?

The taste is too pure, that's what it tastes like.

I am a person who does not read light novels very much. I was not interested in love or the interaction of emotions and relationships before. When I read this book, I had a deep feeling of "It's amazing to be able to write such delicate words." Regarding the reading experience of this book, I can see some immature aspects, but the overall writing style is smooth. More importantly, you can feel the energy the author put into polishing the characters and words. Finally, regarding the beginning, in my opinion, it is very courageous to start with the heroine committing suicide. Only the so-called large amount of psychological description can stabilize this plot.

The first 200,000 words are fairy grass. I hope this post will not be deleted. I think if I follow the previous writing method and finish it within 1 million words without being greedy, this novel will definitely have good results.

Where does the devil from the outside come from? It doesn't look like a newbie. Does the author have any other books?

No system, no dark game. Is it impossible to be reborn in another world without a system? Why is it that the seams are getting more complex and messy now? Can't we win without a system? It sounds like an invincible novel from the beginning, but if it still suppresses combat power like this, it all depends on the system? If you can't write long stories, can you write short stories? Why add some weird settings? It may seem like it's enriching your content, but it's actually detached from the topic. What is lightness in light novels? Have to choose

It's so good. What should I do if it's five o'clock? What should I do if I have a meeting at nine o'clock? It's so good. Two more chapters.

I feel that the recent plot, starting from the time when the principal forced the protagonist and the two of them to go to some underground Go world, has been a bit inexplicably skewed. Maybe you should take a few days off to sort out the plot.

The male protagonist has a golden finger, but he can't stand it. The male protagonist is like a salted fish. He lies down every day and dreams of becoming the richest man in Japan. He has almost no development of the golden finger. The interaction with the female protagonist was quite good before, but suddenly the female protagonist is assigned a background of Japan's top chaebol, and she is suspected of being used as a villain. With the male protagonist's current state of play, how can he win? There are still big problems with the Go plot. The male protagonist helps the female protagonist to become a chess master. There is no clear main plot. I just write whatever comes to my mind. When the male protagonist only fed a few AI chess records and didn't go through a lot of games, the female protagonist's chess skills improved rapidly, and it was open to the female protagonist. They are obviously two people with top talents, but now they are content with the status quo and don't work hard at all. The male protagonist has a system, but is addicted to frying fish. The female protagonist has top talents, but is not determined, wavering between Go and the male protagonist. The result is that readers don't know what the hero and heroine are doing every day. Apart from falling in love, these two people have no ambition at all. The main point of criticism is the male protagonist. He was a world champion in his previous life, but he is a mess in this life. I doubt that the male protagonist won the world crown by raising his hand. Moreover, the updates are now unstable, and the plot progress is even slower, falling into an endless loop. It would be great if it could be worth 10,000 per day and the progress of the main line could be faster.

As the title states, the subject matter and general direction of this book are all written in the introduction. If you can accept it, it will be a good read and it will flow naturally. However, although the heroine's heavy mentality is used to drive the plot at the beginning, the atmosphere is still quite relaxed later on. I would like to call it the starting point. This year's new book light novel champion, if you are not convinced, come to argue and bring the title of the book. As for whether the author has seniority or not, it doesn't matter. I hope it can be kept updated. I'll give it a try first.

This text smells like a perfect little virgin.

The biggest problem is that these paragraphs are too frustrating. And this Ji Dao is completely untrue to his word. If you pursue reality too much, there will definitely be something wrong with you. Since you want to block the chess game, it is useless whether you have to make a bet or not. People will fall out if they want to, so what is the point of your gambling? It's just like being scolded in the fifth game of Yu-Gi-Oh! People can threaten you whether you play cards or not, so why are you still playing cards? And it's very frustrating. A cool article. A book that makes people feel happy will not make them feel happy or happy. That's the biggest problem. Can't you just follow the example of the legend of fighting cards next door? Betting must be based on rules that both parties follow.

Why does it give me the feeling of listening to the sun? It was absolutely invincible before it was put on the shelves, but later on it became more and more unclear what to write about?

Playing chess is not that exciting, and falling in love is not that sweet. This is my biggest feeling after reading this book 🙂 I hope the author can improve it. If not, it is good to maintain the current level.

The last time was the same, he was rescued from the rooftop. One plays the cello and the other plays the piano☝️🤓

As for the main character, the brother, Hideki Akita, he is quite disgusting and has lewd thoughts in his mind. I can understand it. I read the book "Under the Sea" before, and many people always thought that a brother is basically lustful, but there are no such people like this Akita. The president asked him to join in the chess gambling game. He first touched his hand and then touched something. I doubt if he loses again, the president will have to go to the hotel with him tonight. , Placed in Little Butter, there really is a heroine with the personality of the president, which is quite disgusting. Your book also has pure love as its main theme.

Now the author probably doesn't even know how to write. He doesn't have that level of writing about chess, and he can't go into depth and follow the royal path of a romantic light novel. Writing about feelings is progressing very quickly, so I can only forcefully push it, which seems very watery. I don't dare to write about party struggles, and now I want to add some fantasy into it. Okay, here comes the problem. In this situation, to be honest, I can't figure out what to do.

Blow on it, it tastes good. The communication between the male and female protagonists is well developed and naturally unobtrusive. It's really rare on male channels. What is common in male videos is that high-quality women with no logic will look at the male protagonist differently for no reason, and everyone loves him~~ Not only are the male and female protagonists well written, but the supporting characters are also very recognizable. The male and female characters are unique but the president is a ruthless person who will risk his life for the sake of the club. The heroine's senior brother is a bit of a cheapskate, and the senior sister's words are only seen as venomous at the moment, but this is consistent with a young man's success and looking down on low-level people. The author sees that I am boasting so much, can you share some of the books you have written before? A bit bookish.

Smooth, sincere, beautiful, refreshing and natural, love comes naturally. It satisfied my fantasy of youthful love when I was a teenager. The author is really amazing.

Among all the demerit points for plot poisoning, hair-raising, anticlimax, weekly updates, etc., The eunuch is definitely a huge demerit item. He may even cause your author account to lose credibility. It is more serious than the unfinished story. What's more, you are the eunuch after boasting about Haikou. You might as well just let him unfinished, at least you can have an explanation after you finish writing.

If not, just send a tj announcement Pulling it is pure torture

I talked about slowing down the pace of updates to ensure quality, but after holding it in for so many days, I added a bunch of settings and got stuck.

Please tell the eunuch too, don't keep us waiting.

I still hope you can finish it, I really like this book.

When I read this author yesterday, I immediately signed the contract after updating three chapters. My intuition told me that the possibility of being this author's vest is very high.

As title

I think the writing about Go is okay, but the emotional line is broken.

Who is it?