Infinite Doomsday Train, Start as a Card Maker

It has flown infinitely, and the time traveler is not the original body, but still has the memory that the body carries

The setting of your book is actually quite good. It's the mission world. The selection was a bit sloppy. The difficulty of the plot is unstable and the supporting characters are a bit slow. Writing type book. The first is the copy level. The level of the copy should be linked to the rewards. For example, the sword fairy you wrote about. It's very intellectual. Don't open Wushuang as soon as you come up. Kai Wushuang is the most difficult to write. Because you are invincible in the early stage, how can you write in the later stage? You can't survive the early stage. Step by step. 90% Of novels are good novels. This is how it all goes. And the interesting process is all in the early stage. Whether it's cultivating immortality, fantasy, science fiction, or systematic literature, etc. The novices pecking each other in the early stages is the most interesting and interesting. Your book just lacks competition. Lack of character and protagonist competition. But if you wrote this book yourself, you didn't use AI or anything. Then your writing is actually pretty good. An author only needs to write well. In fact, I think it's already half successful. The other half depends on your imagination. Your creativity is gone. Like I said, take it step by step. Most of the novels that hit the street are not step-by-step. It's all just one thought. If you don't control it, you will be awesome, awesome, awesome. Ah, nothing but awesome. For example, your playing cards. What are the characteristics of Hello playing cards? Four colors. 13 Cards, basic cards. Two kings. You have to set it up around the characteristics of the playing cards. For example, plum blossoms, what are their bonuses? What is the king's bonus? It is not necessary to use the card draw mode. This card drawing mode actually doesn't feel right. Because readers may not have played games like Yu-Gi-Oh! I don't necessarily know what the purpose is, the setting of entering the graveyard after using it. I just think you are confused. You just write 54 cards. Seal skill characters and so on. It's up to you how to use it, but it requires energy and blue. There used to be a book called Earth Ol and its setting was like this. Seal people with cards. Then that person has characteristics because of the seal he sealed. The ultimate move that seals the boss. Then return it. Wait, wait. Come on for the next book!

I feel like this book is frizzy, and I think about it one by one.