The Fanatic of the School of Magic

1. Read more of Wo's books 2. If you think Wo's writing is good, you can vote for Wo. Wo can see it in the background, and Wo will be very happy. 3. Remember not to raise the snail to death. 4. If you have any comments, you can submit them to WoWu, which can also be seen on the WoW backstage. 5. Snail likes you.

No, why is there a fantasy division? . . Woman threw himself into fantasy and entered a different world. Wodu discovered it after writing 150,000 words. . Snail is a fool. . .

Large-scale narratives and explanations account for a large proportion, The young protagonist reads more than a hundred chapters, and then jumps in a hurry, Frequent and frivolous Internet language screens readers,

I spent most of the day reading it while taking advantage of the limited exemption. The beginning is okay, but the author likes to express some bad things about himself, and will persuade people to quit After it was put on the shelf, I didn't see any bad words, but it seems to be a chapter that just came out, before settling down to selling potions and developing into the academy. It was too long, too watery, and too slow. If it wasn't for the limited exemption, it would have been Dissuade a large number of people from quitting The academy chapter is also a bit out of touch with the previous world view. The characters and other descriptions are the same as those of the ordinary magic world academy. The world view written earlier is depressing. Magicians are not good people. The society has been killing magicians. However, all the students and tutors in the academy are all good people. It is difficult to judge.

The sense of déjà vu in Lao A is too strong. Many things and people feel like Lao A's short story with some elements from another world added.

Compare eating preferences. The author's writing style is average (even a little bad), and he often inserts meaningless baggage into the narrative (mainly because it is not funny), resulting in a poor sense of immersion. I can tell a story clearly, but I also like to add jokes and personal stuff. Moreover, in this aspect of plugging, the author's level is obviously insufficient. The beginning of the plot is very confusing and not explained clearly at all. Later, as the world view unfolds, the perception gradually becomes better, and you can feel that the author has carefully designed the world view. The worldview design is okay. In short, the current evaluation is that if you like it, if you don't care about the writing style and like an interesting world view, you can still give it a look.

I know that the world view of this book is so complete, and the interesting protagonist is rational and decisive. There have been few battle scenes since it was put on the shelves, and the introduction to the world view is often five or six chapters, which is too watery for book lovers, but of course it is just right for readers with limited exemptions 🙂

It took me 3 and a half hours to read this book, and I feel that there are several main shortcomings. 1. The author has an obvious tendency to enjoy himself in the free chapters, using a lot of Internet memes, and his desire for expression is too strong 2. The language in the free chapters is a bit procrastinating and watery 3. The setting is good, but he did not explain it clearly in the free chapters But all this is different in the paid chapters. The author has made great progress in the paid chapters and has several advantages. 1. The paid chapters did not continue to use Internet memes 2. The language has made significant progress, and there is no continued use 3. The desire for expression has significantly decreased, the plot has become more compact, and there is no tendency to enjoy myself 4. The grasp of refreshing points is more appropriate The above is my main feeling after reading it for several hours

Let me ask, is the theme of this book about the brave man saving the world? , Just changing salvation into society? I'm currently reading chapter 91. To be honest, changing the protagonist's goal to returning home would be better than this.

At present, I have read about 60% of the game. Here are my personal opinions: 1. The background of this article is the magical version of America from another world. The author has given a more reasonable explanation for the killing line under extraordinary abilities. 2. Personally, I think the story is quite attractive and not overpowering. The author's hook on the protagonist should be quite big, but even if the hook is not big, it is difficult to overturn systemic oppression. But I have a few concerns: 1. I have read so much so far, but the story time in the book is short, and the protagonist is only 6 years old. I don't know how the author will handle it. I hope it won't happen that after writing hundreds of thousands of words, the protagonist is still underage. 2. I feel that the author writes the article in a cheerful manner. Sometimes the mood is slightly aroused, but is immediately dispelled by the author's own complaints. The following is just a personal opinion. I hope the author will work hard.