Douluo: What Do You Mean This Is the Holy Spirit Religion?

It's an interesting subject matter, but the protagonist is not exciting enough. I haven't written out the character design. Except for the first one, it is not reflected in the back. The early route is a bit boring. I would like to give the author a suggestion. The character design of the protagonist can be a little more interesting. Write the original version of Douluo Continent. For example, Shrek has no city lord. The tens of thousands of bugs in the original book are definitely enough for you to write a two-hundred-word novel.

Once you look at this segmentation, you can tell that it was written by AI. People would not segment it like this.

Writing blindly. The author lets himself go more and more towards the end, as if he is on drugs. I feel like I don't have an outline, I want to write it down as I go

I feel happy for the protagonist's name

This book is okay. Anyway, as a fanfiction, although it is not top-notch, it is at least above average. After all, I've eaten so much shit that my lower limit has been infinitely lowered. The problem with this book is probably that because the author typed it by voice, there were some typos, and the writing felt crowded. But plot advancement is no problem. There are some problems in the author's book that he doesn't know whether he did deliberately or accidentally, and the reasons he gave can convince me for the time being. In addition, this is now free, so my evaluation is that if you are short of books, you can read it.

What is written here? Is there a female protagonist? Don't go to the end and refuse to accept any of them or only take one. It's very disgusting and you won't reply to anyone.

Can you go back and correct the typo so that I can attract monthly votes?

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Let's call it Chimera, five-headed Chimera? The measurement unit of head is a bit confusing. Is there anything nicer to say? Five Chimeras.

It's well written. It's really beautiful.