Starting from Being Unemployed, I Traveled Alone

It is not recommended to slow down without a fan base. These comics are so new. I have never read them. Season 2 of The Daredevils was abandoned. I upgraded the comics on my own and after reading Ant Fight, my impression was average.

Are you a time traveler? Take it for granted, scribble

We read novels to enjoy watching the protagonist pretend to fight. What you write is almost like a nanny article.

I just picked it up and read it hastily. I traveled through the Daredevils in the first 14 chapters, and then I wrote 30 chapters (which I haven't finished yet). I basically came here to read it for the jobless, and now it's a bit indifferent. If the dungeon is to be long, it is best to choose a popular one. A niche dungeon should transition quickly and skip unnecessary parts. For example, if you do not plan to accept a heroine in the dungeon world, it is best not to describe too many characters in this world and end the dungeon within 10 chapters. You usually only update two chapters a day. If you write a niche copy for more than half a month, no one will read it.

There is nothing wrong with writing a new series and there is still an audience, but the first is that the pace is too slow, and the second is that the female protagonists in other worlds are not touched or accepted. Isn't this the only way to watch fan fiction for unlimited streaming? It clearly misses one of the fun points. The female protagonists in the main world (without jobs) have not grown up and others are not touched. Monk Wen, forget about you "pure and pure"! Still suppressing the combat power, I can barely reach the second level of combat power now. The performance of the previous male protagonist was also mediocre and unexciting. To sum up, it is neither fun to fight nor to accept girls. By Chapter 70, it seems as if you haven't watched it yet. At the beginning, the main characters are all children. Now the pace is faster, it's more fun to fight, and you can still watch the girls. You have to choose one of the two, and you haven't watched anything. You shouldn't rush in the general direction.

Why give the disgusting setting of the Dragon God to Ludy? If Ludy doesn't even like his parents, how will he change it later? You can't forcefully change Ludy's setting just to accept Red, White and Blue, and make them dislike Ludy, right? Isn't the exciting part of Jobless just watching Ludy transform from a selfish and lustful otaku to a man who can sacrifice himself for his family? If you make Ludy into a villain that no one loves, it will be unbearable. It's very vulgar and boring.

My book was thrown away, meow😭😭😭

When will it end? I'll be upgrading alone, feeling bored to death.

Recommendation votes, follow-up reading, please give me some words, the author feels like he has crashed

I'm very interested in it. Wouldn't it be nice to choose more popular worlds? The identity setting this time is also quite suitable.

Ever since the author said he wanted to cut it all at once, no one has

I predict that it will almost enter the palace, and the update speed is getting slower and slower.

The protagonist can go to the two worlds of Suqing and Dicuo to get the upgrade system, one for killing monsters and the other for training. You can also go to Aqua to get a plug-in (artifact or magical skill), such as a magic sword or super magic power.

The author's writing up to the Daredevil Party was okay, but it was Rudeus who started to have problems, and that's where the protagonist directly took Sylphy and Iris as his students. According to the introduction, the protagonist accepts three primary characters as female leads, but here the protagonist accepts two female leads as students at the same time. How should we write a love line? In the original work, the emotional lines of all the heroines are separate, so the emotional lines are not abrupt, but here the author directly writes the two heroines together, so it is equivalent to the author writing the emotional lines of the two heroines at the same time. On the contrary, when the protagonist returned to his job for the second time, the emotional description of the two heroines was messed up. It can be seen that the author wanted to describe the process of developing a relationship between the protagonist and the heroine when he wrote the protagonists, Alice and Sylphy. It would be good if you wrote one emotional line for the heroine alone, but it would not work if you wrote two emotional lines at the same time.

Seeing me traveling alone, I thought that the male protagonist also had the system that I could upgrade alone, which could transform enemies into friendly units. Now it seems that I was wrong.

The biggest problem is drag. Drag content and drag updates. Slow updates require more effective things. Originally, the Shuangwen became more and more tedious as I wrote it, which led to the book failing. It started well and there was hope of becoming a god, but the more I wrote, the worse it became.

Although I don't like to accept too many female leads (otherwise the emotional line will be too thin), I have to accept the ones that already have emotional scenes. Will Reise Momo accept them?

When will a new copy be opened? The plot is too slow, right?

Author, author, do you accept my independent female character?

My predecessor had curry sticks, which meant that the world connected by the door included Xingyue. Now Xingyue is at least clearly a world view above the single universe, and it is really possible to copy the source of the virtual universe through the magic of the occult master (although the conditions are extremely harsh). Can you live in this sixth-level system? (In addition, the Servant Universe Canghui Galaxy also has galaxies and cosmic structures that do not rely on mystical rituals)

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Overall, although the pace is slow, it is quite enjoyable. Because the update is too slow, I can only raise it for a while, but I didn't expect that it would be cut.

There is actually a story about how the brave party has a taste of the pros and cons