In Conan, They All Call Me Ace

When I saw Ai Haihara on the cover, I thought she was the heroine, a Conan fic with an indigenous male protagonist + an original female protagonist. I can only say that the author is bold enough.

You are too brave to have one or two original characters appear in Chapter 40. You don't even need to write fan fiction the way you are writing, you can just write something original. Come on, author, this is the first time I've seen a fan like yours.

At first glance, it turns out that there is a one-time monthly pass for posting a book friend circle post, so I have to get it. But I don't know what to post, so let's post a picture, a picture of Sangma Sakawa, the secret of Chapter 15. But after all, I ran out in an emergency, so I'll just leave it at that, maybe I'll change it later (*´∀`*)

I feel like I've seen it somewhere before, and the name is the same.

When will we enter the main plot, and whether the heroine will be Shiho or this boss?

I don't see any ace in the protagonist. Inexplicably, all the female characters have an affair with the protagonist for no reason.

Come on, author, don't be cookie-cutter, have a unique flavor

，，，，，，，，，，，，，？ Who likes sweaty feet and stinky feet? The biggest disadvantage is that it is clearly written as a fan, but it does not allow readers to have a sense of participation. Fan readers like YY. Whether it is the events in the original work or the interaction between the characters, these are the most basic and core. If you break away from these, you are still worthy of being called a fan! How many chapters have passed by the time it's the turn of the main storyline? Even if your new event has nothing to do with the original work, that's fine, but you must keep up with the interaction with the protagonist group. To put it bluntly, you just stick to a few popular female characters, interact, open a harem, and events. The results came in the morning, but you didn't stick to any of these. The only thing that matters is that the score can go up. Readers have already finished running, and after hundreds of thousands of words, there are only a few cases, and only a few cases related to the original work. The first few chapters alone have persuaded a lot of people to quit, and there is basically no interaction with the original work. Also, it was said before that Xiao Ai is the heroine, and the same is true for the cover. As it turned out, when was it time for him to come out, and it was still a background, the kind that was forced to be pulled out to do business, as the name suggests, he was pulled out to wander around, and I had never seen such a roadside one. I have read a book before, and it basically copied the original work. It was like a plot that you would immediately move on to the next after completing one chapter. Basically, one or two chapters were just one event. It was poorly written. However, the results were surprisingly good, and it was even rated as a high-quality book. That's the difference. His essay pen is definitely not as good as yours. He can write emotional lines well, but it is too bloated. Everything is crammed into it. The writing is smelly and long. You need to learn how to do subtraction, and you can't deviate from the topic. In short, if you still dare to do this in the new book, then I can only wish you good luck.

Really awesome, the writing and rhythm are so good

The person next door came to support me. I was sorting out my bookshelf in the book shortage. I am very happy to see this book given a new lease of life. I hope the author will not get sick again this time.

It gives people a feeling of freshness and refinement, without being too trendy. It's very nice to look at. Just insist on updating it. The article can convey the truth.

Coming from next door, I have always liked the stories you wrote before. Not much to say about the previous ones, just come back.

After reading the first two chapters, you can tell that the author is talented.

The author's quality is very good, but I feel that it is not suitable for further reading.

It seems that it is most likely Shiho, and it shouldn't get smaller. It's a pity, compared to Haibara, Shiho is just like that 🙂

Is the author really not afraid of being punished by the will of the old thief Qingshan? 🙂 I would like to ask three questions: 1. For female characters who obviously do not have a romantic relationship with the protagonist, please do not describe their appearance at length. At most, just write about one person who has a good figure and is graceful and graceful. Especially the feet and chest should not be described in detail. Just like in movies, beauties who are not part of the protagonist group are not qualified to enjoy close-ups of breasts and feet, otherwise it will cause confusion in the audience's perception. 2. During transition, it is best to have a mark such as a separator displayed. Otherwise, it may sometimes cause confusion for readers. 3. In the case, it is best for the author to study the order of information disclosure. In the second case, I knew the murderer was the son the moment there was no suspicion in Watada. The one who could break the glass was obviously a man. Only his son could make his father defenseless, and coupled with the unusual situation of traffic jam. . So I think that under appropriate circumstances, it is better to let the protagonist fall into a dilemma for a moment, and then solving the puzzle will be more convincing, otherwise it will be a bit too peaceful.