National Navigation: I Have Hex Technology

The protagonist has gouged Agumon thousands of times, and next he will gouge BattleGreymon. It's too scary, be careful! ! !

The talent setting is too buggy. The weekly roulette wheel gives one rune and two hero skills. There are 52 weeks in a year. Isn't it 52 runes and 104 skills? Even a single-celled creature can become a super god. It's too buggy. Normally, you should draw a lottery once a week in the roulette wheel after paying a certain price, and you have a chance to draw runes and skills according to their rarity.

Navigation can also be the sea of ​​stars, and players can also be space units. Is it enough to overwhelm combat effectiveness in just forty chapters?

The writing is actually quite good, but the hang-up is a bit too big. In the later stage, I will either change the map or eunuch. . . .

I knew you could do it

I feel good after reading it all. I just need to organize the level data. Some high levels are poorly expressed and some levels have no meaning. You can clarify the value range of the level or show the crushing characteristics of the higher level. For example, in some fantasy, the internal circulation, body surface armor, and external strikes are gradual but have the advantage of crushing the lower level. It still makes sense, but the author has to think of an expression that fits the world view.

Did the author use the ellipsis as a period? It looks so uncomfortable.

So far, I have watched the 1st level of the universal category. I can barely read two or three books.

Kangkang

Your hang-up is too big, it will easily crash or overwhelm your combat power.

Why do you keep bringing Chen and the other girls with you... This is quite unnecessary

The level 3 ship is 35 meters long and has 10 robotic arms that can extend 00 meters. Author, would you like to draw it to scale? What is this thing? Let me tell you the truth. Four robotic arms are enough for your boat. Any more will be a burden. What about the cos long-legged spider?