Cultivation Players Will Not Die in Shura Field

This subject matter is very easy to deal with, and we must focus on controlling the number of female protagonists I remember that the first one was so homogeneous that it was no longer interesting. The subsequent ones either the female protagonists cannot be controlled, or their strength cannot be controlled Come on, author.

Your plot is too fast, with no foreshadowing at all, and it feels inexplicable. Not long after the first girl was still in a new state, she suddenly came to fight the big boss, and then the big bosses seemed to be very intelligent. The pace was so fast that it felt like it was supposed to be told in two or three hundred chapters, but in the end, it felt like there were only more than thirty chapters left after the whole process was deleted.

The new book sets sail, thanking all the summoners, reincarnations, travelers, fading ones, duelists, drifters, defenders, edgewalkers, commanders, Blue Star, Destiny Man, Swordsman Tower, Onmyoji, Archbishop, Sacrifice Queen, Heavy Machine Soldier, Outsider, Little Cell, Electric Thief, Investigator, Dragonborn, Astral Druid, Night Shift Security, Energy Agent, Ghost Beast King, Assassin, Kirby, Punishment Rider, Weeding Queen , Master Chief, Jie Xusheng, Old Farmer, Spirit Wizard, Director, Grimm, Toilet Man, Dragoon, Demon Hunter, Jedi Diver, Master, Mystic Warlock, Supreme God, Iron Pilot, Rogue Trader, Ancient Norsia, Warrior of Light, Xiao Xiami, Leader of the People's Alliance, Boy from Barrel Town, Stardust Crusaders, Little Junono, God of the New World, Sapphire Girl, Legendary Legendary Warrior... With strong support. If I don't thank you, then I am ignorant.

No, then who gets the fruit? Does this place have to be poisoned?

The book was signed after only a few chapters, so fast 😰

I think this book is very interesting. Good luck to the author.

It's really well written (ᵔᴥᵔ)

Baby, why haven't you updated today?

I feel like my reading has been cut in half recently. Last night at 10 o'clock, I was actually second in reading. Maybe I didn't control the rhythm.

It can be said that the heroines are not normal people, but at least the one who is abnormal is the heroine, and the logic is normal. But after this one was released, when his sister could not be saved, he went to the doctor in a hurry, and found the protagonist of the last hope who was not the professional to treat him. As a result, the following doctor-patient dialogue appeared: What is the current situation? ——I am dying. This person is very important to me. What disease do you have?——It's none of your business, you just prescribe medicine. What are the symptoms? - It's none of your business, just prescribe medicine. How about some of my special universal antibiotics? - Oh, it works. What are the symptoms? What are the symptoms? When should I start? Is this really a response that humans who can live a normal life in the real world can do? Just looking at this behavior, I thought that this person didn't want to be treated for some reason. He pretended to be harmonious on the surface, but was actually very disappointed when he was cured. He felt that there was no point in hiding it. He felt that the miracle doctor would be useful to him in the future, so he quickly changed his attitude and flattered the other person to reveal all his illness. Otherwise, I don't understand how the brain that can set up this doctor-patient dialogue can survive in the real world and be able to raise a family with a big house and a seriously ill sister by one person. The background, personality and behavior are completely separated.

I swallowed up Chapter 107 when I started scheduled publishing. It has been reissued. Sorry.

The subject matter is okay, but the protagonist has too many problems that haven't been dealt with. Let's talk about myself first. I can't improve my strength and don't have enough money. On the other hand, I have to worry about the two female protagonists. One of the two female protagonists is disabled and the other is useless and seems to be sick. What's the point of asking the female protagonist to give money, and what's the point of giving a cat a fruit to increase his talent?

Do the heroines disappear after they appear in their respective worlds? Isn't this the equivalent of a dream ending?

I can understand the main character being a loser. But I can't understand that the main character is mentally retarded. The time I gave the Magic Source Fruit to my childhood sweetheart, I still hid it without knowing it. And even though he knew that the fallen witch had similar means of seizing bodies, he was not prepared at all. Also, you told the witch that her senior sister was a fallen witch, but you didn't tell the teacher because you didn't have enough evidence. Later, the teacher asked you about it, but you still didn't tell her. It's okay if you don't reveal your behavior and don't tell her. The protagonist has no forewarning at all like a coin-killer, no common sense at all. Whether it is reality or novels, there will always be a phenomenon where villains will cause trouble whenever there are celebrations, competitions, exams, or the like. No sense of caution at all.

I'd like to ask if it's over?

Then there is another book, Talking Elbow, written by King Spare Your Life, which became a hit in 18 years. If you don't remember this book, he later wrote about the nomenclature of the night. The first series of these books are also famous. Although it has been a long time, I still feel that this book is very magical. It promotes the initiative with diligent and funny daily routines. But the most important thing is that he incorporates diligent and funny daily routines in the process of promoting the main plot. You can turn around and see how to efficiently advance the main line and at the same time carry some daily

I think the writing is pretty good, but no one reads it👀

I just don't know if it will be cut in half. Let's support and wait and see. Will it win?

Introduction to the novel I wrote: I escaped from death, but was imprisoned in the forest by the woman who rescued me. She is the only survivor of the rumored brave team that has been wiped out long ago. She is a brave warrior who has killed countless monsters. She saved my life, but she didn't allow me to leave the hut even half a step; she took care of me tenderly, but when I tried to escape, her eyes were as cold as ice. "This time, don't think about escaping again." I thought she was being imprisoned, but as we got along day after day, I saw clearly her fragility and tenderness hidden under her paranoia. The follow-up high-energy plot and famous yandere scenes will be arranged soon!

I haven't seen it for a long time. How about ordering it once it's available? Can you finish writing it? I personally feel that the pace is a bit slow. It means that it takes half a month to advance in a world. Or it may be that you are slower () but the overall feeling is slower. You may have almost forgotten the plot of the last chapter before starting the next chapter. Then you have to advance several main lines at the same time. It took a lot of effort to complete the wasteland in half a month, and then started to save people. The first main line of magical girls was delayed for too long. I remember a long time ago that I read a similar book called "The Fox in the Cabinet" and wrote a book about two cat girls. His outline was similar to yours. You can also travel to different worlds through software, and you can even communicate with you as immersively as you are, but its pace is faster than yours. You can go and take a look.