They Are All My Controlling Characters

I wanted to find a book to relieve my fatigue in the morning, but I ended up reading Red Warm. I wanted to give a harsh review directly, but after a delay, I calmed down, and then I smiled with relief. That's it. After reading books for so many years, I have learned to reconcile with various books. Let me talk about the first 13 chapters of this book. I can't stand it anymore The first 13 chapters of this book are gathered together. They are anti-intellectual, mechanical, irritating, and have no logical problems. Infuriating: After taking control of the heroine's body, the protagonist has gone through a lot of things and is about to take revenge on the maid. Then, just as he is about to start, the author directly arranges for the protagonist to go offline. The reason given is that the "anti-addiction system" is probably similar to the one who killed your father. The enemy is in front of you. You are about to take action, and two people come to take you out and say: "You should pee, let's finish." Just give me a red temperature Anti-intellectual: The protagonist said that I want to use this person quickly The creature rescued my body, but I didn't seem to care at all in my actions. I said in public that the royal family is a bastard. Not to mention the twists and turns, you don't care at all how this character will save people if he is retaliated by the royal family? Like a stupid young man, it makes people doubt whether he has IQ or not, just to pretend to be awesome Deus Ex Machina: Then why did the prince not take revenge on the protagonist? Because the author directly arranged: "You can't report this situation. The reason given by "Restore" is to maintain the manners of the royal family No logic: Why can the protagonist defeat the villains in this book? It's not because the protagonist is so awesome, it's because the villains are all gods and money-killers Comprehensive evaluation: 6 points (as long as the writing is not embarrassing, no matter the plot or the characters, I will give 6 points) The pretense is embarrassing. It's not only bad writing, but also self-defeating. The plot is mediocre. It's not much different from the new books that are wholesaled every day now. The writing is stable, but it can't be said to be brilliant

Broad-minded but depressed, start praying

Um, can you tell the difference between low IQ and arrogance?

You will win but you will grow up too

Oh?

Ciallo～miscellaneous fish～

Family of Gods😅

Why is it so beautifully written but no one praises it? A little strange

Eleanor's line should be about fighting, just like Dharma Ring 4. Mel's appearance is really bad, and it's not as lovable as Louis, the 4th one. Isn't your book just about solving puzzles? The first female protagonist pretends to be cool and slaps Feng Aotian in the face. The second heroine has a great time fighting with two people, pretending to get artifacts. The third heroine depends on how long you want to play this game. If you want to continue playing, choose the third heroine's dual identity, collect assassinations and solve puzzles. A certain fourth heroine builds her power. If you don't want to play, arrange for the third heroine to directly enter the main line. What you arranged Mel is really not good. It looks like a little girl on the surface, but in fact I don't know which old man or which aunt she is. I think it can be cut. I will start over from the beginning in the next book, so that the popularity will be higher.

Why do manipulative books usually have a chatty protagonist + a weak chick or even a weak female protagonist?

I would like to ask the author, do you not plan to correct the typos and paragraph errors here?