Can I Just Have the Body?

Children, run away, it's suspected to be a super eunuch 🙂

You can be anyone, just don't be a firefly, okay? I'm so scared

Formula new book, formula book title, formula eunuch, no-prize guessing, whether the next book can exceed 200,000 words

It seems like a password. How many years have you been a eunuch? Ying 🐶

It's a eunuch before it's even released on the shelves. It's really outrageous. I don't think there's anything wrong with the writing? Why is he a eunuch?

Newbie, new book, please read it!

The writing is good, but unfortunately, the author obviously thinks too highly of himself and just wants to become famous with one book. For many writers, the author simply doesn't care if they can write a million words. This is what is called having a heart higher than the sky.

It's interesting, but it's too short and I can't see the future. Looking at it so far, I feel that one problem is that the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine seems to be getting closer too quickly Forget it about Tsukishima, after all, it is understandable that he has separated from normal social interactions and has no sense of distance from the protagonist But it is a bit strange for the protagonist to treat Tono as a good brother. And it's not an exaggerated psychological activity. Whether it's addressing Xiaokui directly or putting a hand on the shoulder affectionately, it's a real out-of-bounds behavior for two people who weren't even acquaintances a few days ago. It would be fine if the author planned to make the protagonist a Jiraimi image, but the protagonist has only shown closeness to two female protagonists so far, so it seems like he is forcing the progress... Another small problem is that I found that the protagonist in the current few chapters seems to be using the original owner's fighting skills or the skills given by the system to show off, and basically does not show his own unique charm... The only impression worth mentioning is the part where he dealt with Tsukishima's elementary school tutor. However, this is a common problem in Internet literature, so there is no need to force it. I can only say that there is room for improvement.

He obviously stopped acting. He knew the outcome, so why didn't he avoid it? 😡

I originally wanted to find something good, but it turned out to be soul-piercing again😭