Am I an Immortal? Isn't This a Rumor?

It's all my own opinion You can tell I'm a newbie or just a veteran The first part is quite interesting👍🏻 It's a good point to travel through ancient times and become a small hero and then have an impact in reality👍🏻 The Legend of White Snake The party was pretty good with highlights 👍🏻 But then it became boring The martial arts and law cultivation were not well written The MC wanted to be tall and brave but he was very weak The fighting scenes were very boring and boring Too little and too much fun Separated. I feel like it's watery when I read it. It's also quite messy. Didn't the painting say that I was at home in the capital? Why did it end up in the bag? Didn't it say that I was going to open a new antique store? Why did I separate and go back to the old store? It can be seen that the author wanted to write a big villain, but he didn't. The accurate realm. The fighting scenes in the back are not interesting to watch. The MC is Taiping Daozu and Fa Hai, but the writing feels very weak I can't stand it anymore 🫠 Author, please do your best. I'll keep it for now. I'll watch it another day when I think of it 🙏🏼

Why is it that the author writes everything in Chinese? It's all in Chinese without any translation, how can I understand it?

I have read all your comments, and I am very grateful to every reader for their love and support for this book. I am not a very powerful author, nor am I a person who has seen the world. I never went to college and didn't know I could get a loan if I didn't have money. I have never been to Zhenjiang, so I don't know how different the weather there is from at home. I will try my best to check if I don't understand. If you have any questions, you are welcome to correct me and I will correct them. I hope I can tell you a good story, I hope I can make some money and really go to Zhenjiang to see it. So I will try my best to write well. I just hope you won't scold me too harshly, because I really know how to delete comments. Mengxin thanks everyone for your support, I love you.

It doesn't look like it was written by a human being, because even a primary school student doesn't have this kind of intelligence. . . Maybe it's AI. There are a lot of similar problems. The content after it's released is extremely confusing and even more outrageous than before. I looked at the chapter list and randomly picked a few to read, and I saw something so outrageous. . .

The first part was fine, but starting from Zhang Jiao, the feeling of helplessness and depression was too great. The protagonist starts to do big things without much development in reality. One link within another, the official has no use except as a radar driver. Can you write about other Longhu Mountains and so on? Or should we wait until later and become the protagonist?

The short story is better than the main story because the main story is original and the short story is a plagiarized game branch.

If you don't want to write about the evils of human nature, don't set the first copy in the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. In this context, the protagonist's modern behavior and habits are very uncomfortable to watch.

It has the flavor of Suppressing Demon and Yashe, but the third copy feels a bit like Wen Qingbing in the late stage of Suppressing Demon. You can write about feelings and righteousness, but if two of the three copies talk about this content, it will easily make people feel offended. Personally, I still prefer the second copy, which describes the story behind the history.

You really don't need to read the rest, it's changed. It's okay if you have been involved in history. A tomb keeper pops up out of nowhere and causes trouble for thousands of years. Then, Taoism and Buddhism act like there is no one, asking the protagonist to fight.

At the beginning, Holy Mother, I couldn't stand it any longer. If you can't control it, can't you stop writing such a plot? If you can't write well again and again, isn't that a source of frustration?

It has the feel of a demon-suppressing museum, or simply a copycat. It starts high and goes low, but this one collapses faster. I can't stand it at all. It feels like the AI ​​has finished running and manually changed the order of the paragraphs.

Are all Taoist masters useless? A tombkeeper can do so many things, and everyone can see through time and space, but he just doesn't care about the little monsters.

After only seeing a few pictures, he was already poisoned and died.

Yanyun Sixteenth Voice is also getting better, and the author has copied the side quests at the starting point.

Before it goes on the shelves and after it goes on the shelves, they are two completely different books. I originally thought that I would continue to explore the secrets behind historical stories and expand further, but I didn't expect to become a modern firefighter.

Yanyun is a good game. The main plot is all about knives, and the side plots are all about ghosts. First-class plot, first-class music, and a lot of multiplayer activities. . . . Wait until Jiangnan is finished and go back to play!

So far, I think it's okay. I've given you the monthly recommendation tickets. No matter if you're anticlimactic or something else, if you want to stop updating, I'll send you the blade.

Baby, I really want you to come back. I still can't help crying when I think of you late at night. I wrote and deleted messages. I also tried my best to save you when you left. The biggest regret in my life is that I can't go to the end with you. Many things I promised you have not been completed. I wish I could meet you at the age of marriage. I feel that the world is unfair. I sincerely always feel let down. I beg you to come back. It must be very annoying. I have written a lot of words these days, thinking about which day I want to show you what I want you to do. You know how I came here these days. You asked me before if I regret being with you. To be honest, I have no regrets because as long as it is what I like, no matter whether it is good or not, I will give you my best. I have become accustomed to having you every day. When you leave, you don't want me anymore. I smoke and drink like a useless person every day. I thought this would kill my thoughts about you. But every time I get drunk, the person I think of is you. Maybe you think I am particularly worthless. It's not that we are inappropriate, it's just that I really want to see your updates.

A stunning start. Three monthly passes. It's fun to watch. No more.

In the second story, why is the woman in the picture scroll so pitiful? It was she who caused the Yuanwai family to suffer, the scholar trapped her in the painting, and she was willing to kill people just for revenge?

Um, Taiping Juan has a computer virus, and the chronological order is very messed up.

I loved tomatoes since I was a child and bought one every day for more than ten years. Suddenly one day tomatoes were out of stock, and I burst into tears in the supermarket, but no one else understood. An old lady saw me crying so hard and stuffed me a tomato from the vegetable basket. I was still crying and hiccupping. The lady asked doubtfully: Don't you want tomatoes? I was the only one bursting into tears. They all didn't understand. I didn't want tomatoes. What I wanted was for the author to be better and faster! ! !

It's beautiful and the subject matter is very novel. I hope the author won't stop updating, don't give up, and keep writing. Come on👏

It feels like breaking down, the beginning is wonderful. There is no sense of gradualness. The leap is too great.

The short story is better than the main plot, but it's not that good if there are more and more vests.

It's run by Pure AI. In one chapter, you can first appear to go home and then express your feelings about not being able to go back and having trouble. It's really useful.

The early writing was okay, but later it felt like it was run by AI.

You, your timing skills and PhD writing are so low! It's worse than not writing at all, and writing it down will bring down the whole book. What the hell can control and influence the history of the world? You are comparable to the top "immortal" in those fantasy/immortality novels. Dozens of core members of the Time Sequence Society have mastered the laws of time, and the Doctor even lived in the long river of history. In the end, the Explosive Doctor became ♾️. Wouldn't it be normal to write about the protagonist using ancient artifacts with historical information to travel through history and continue to become stronger? Even if you write about a villain, don't write into the long history! Writing about villains has a long history and has been passed down step by step. But the villain you wrote, author, was able to interfere with the long history of the Yin and Shang Dynasties, directly erasing, modifying, and writing the long history of history. This modified history can concretely and affect the modern time where the protagonist is, which is super awesome.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that made me eager to read the next chapter

Is there a shrimp version of this book? I feel like I've seen it somewhere 🤔