Travel Through Different Timelines Simultaneously

It is a novel that tests the author's writing skills. It reminds me of watching the brain-burning plot of The Sun and the Moon. I wonder if there is a very dark past, present and future protagonist.

It's very difficult to write like this. Author, it's all connected together, it's a test of your ability. Do you have an outline? How many words does it have?

Rare originality of traveling through time at the same time, take a look first

This kind of non-parallel world timeline writing method, coupled with infinite loops, will definitely collapse and make it impossible to play.

The author tried to come up with a very cool setting, but he couldn't explain it clearly 😅

If this kind of group portrait writing method cannot be updated, I guess the author will use love to generate electricity.

I haven't watched it yet, but I read the introduction there. Time travel from time to time. Doesn't it mean that the protagonist will definitely die later in a certain period of time? Otherwise, they can always bump into each other.

Chapter 10 Xiu Bai made it clear that the extra small cauldron and bone fragments were not his own, and he didn't know what they were. And Chapter 23 also says that the small tripod was obtained by Xiong Bai. Knowing that the material is very hard, Mo Fabai used it as an anchor point in the early stages of his training, so it is very contradictory.

The setting is good, but the world view is too big. I set it up from the beginning and laid out ten chapters. After reading the whole story, I felt that my brain was overloaded. Then the protagonist has traveled through time for 10 years. I didn't start from the time travel. I also wanted to explain the events of 10 years, so I wrote a lot of chapters.

It's not the ordinary random cultivation system that is not eye-catching enough, and the summary is not clear enough. I want to write something more logical and complicated, but the hook is not new enough to attract people. If you want to write this kind of reference to Brother Huozi, you have to work harder. The hook is too dull and cannot attract people. You haven't started practicing in this 36 chapter, there are no women, there are no fights 🤔

There is no substitute for the protagonist, the protagonist is not the protagonist, and the supporting characters have no arc, they are very empty.

I haven't read it yet, but from the introduction, it sounds like someone with a gifted supernatural power called the Supreme Being of the Nine Realms Gate.

It is recommended to add a parallel world setting later, otherwise it will collapse later.

There is indeed something. But at the beginning, I was wondering why I didn't expand on the details and complete the character. Only after reading it did I realize that the author really couldn't write. Then I would suggest that the author just write it in a more slap-in-the-face style. Just write what you want to write. Some unnecessary details will be passed on directly. More interesting plots would be better than anything else. Writing style and attention to detail are not something that can be achieved overnight.

In summary, the writing is okay, but there is a slight flaw in the mountain being occupied.

Such a master's writing style, it attracted me to finish reading it, but unfortunately it felt like it lacked some of the core elements of online writing. Or maybe it's because of subject matter restrictions?

Or even less, just for the supporting characters you wrote. One point is that the character's relationship with the protagonist is unclear when he appears. If the protagonist does not appear, and the supporting character's relationship with the protagonist is unclear, readers will not be able to get involved and will become very anxious while watching. Then I have to write for several more days, which is relatively long and prolongs the first point. Although I quite like reading the descriptions of these supporting characters. Still less.

Guess how long it will take to stop updating? 🤓🤓🤓

Hey, it's actually pretty good, but there are too few updates. But now it seems that the author has entered the palace.

Eunuch is normal, there are too many things written, it's too messy

This book is either against the will of heaven, or it is dead and cannot die again. Anyway, the first few chapters are really good, it just depends on whether the author can come back to his senses.

Simultaneous Travel: Inherit the Copy of Ten Thousand Realms

Dude, did you write a new book. April 14th