I Picked up a Future Phone

I think writing Cthulhu-type novels can indeed make money, but how can any pseudo-human short story make money faster?

The protagonist written by the author is a bit anti-human. Who would not be curious if they get a mobile phone with a certain future? How many normal people can bear not to watch it. As a result, the author writes that the protagonist is arranged to watch it if the plot requires it, and is thrown aside when it is not needed. It is entirely for the sake of the plot and does not even have an overall understanding of the future. It goes against human curiosity.

The problem is a bit big. There are ready-made web articles on mobile phones. Why don't you export them and publish them directly? Let the protagonist write it himself? If you have to write it yourself, you have to change the reason. You can't do it for money. You have to say it's the main character's dream or something. Only logic makes sense. You said that you have so many novels on your phone, you can just get some vests, and you can't make money by automatically publishing them.

The main character is not like a normal person. He has a mobile phone from the future, so he watches a video and a few chapters of the novel about the future, and then disappears. A normal person would have gone through the contents of his mobile phone and insist on writing a novel by himself. Isn't it easier to just copy it? I just met a girl, she is a beautiful online novel author, and she is still a high school student. She is really good.

So the protagonist picked up the phone and took it for himself? ? ?

In 2006, the anti-theft door was stained with rust. Apply for normal college. There is no ridicule for having three hundred in the pocket. You can borrow several thousand yuan in foreign debt. It doesn't look like he belongs to a wealthy family or a very wealthy person. When will college students still use push-button cell phones in 2026?

This part of writing a novel makes me vomit. If there is a ready-made one, I have to adapt it myself. Does the protagonist have the strength? The author's own writing style is not that good.

I picked up the mobile phone from the future and it seems that someone has written about it

The idea is good, but the main plot is wrong

The plot between the protagonist and Qingmei is too long, especially since Qingmei has already shown her talent and the protagonist is still grinding away, it is another classic wooden protagonist who laughs to death.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not very good.

The previous writing was actually pretty good, but when I got on stage to give a speech and Tudou called me, I couldn't keep up and I skipped a few chapters and it was a pity.

The rhythm is slow and inhuman, a bit like a junior high school boy. What can I say? Forget it, I suggest you cut it off as soon as possible. Also, does Mengru like this name so much?

A self-righteous trash protagonist

The author is so naive that even after looking at the future, he still doesn't understand that you need to have money before you can pursue a hobby! I have to write a novel with a few G by myself, so why not write it! !

I was embarrassed to see the protagonist being so stupid. No wonder there are fewer and fewer natives in urban literature.

If I clear the 6G cache, it won't have any impact on reading!

The subject matter is really good, but how should I put it? It was because of the subject matter that I read this novel, but I don't know how to comment on the author. He made me feel that this novel was boring.

It's so disgusting.

In the future, the value of the mobile phone itself will exceed the content inside it, right?

I don't like this kind of novel where the golden finger has cause and effect. I once read a book where the golden finger is a reborn person whose notes were picked up by the protagonist. The reborn person has habitual amnesia due to the side effects of rebirth. In the end, the protagonist who picked up the reborn person reaches the top of his life. The reborn person is wandering and begging for food. . I left a message in the comment area back then: Why didn't the protagonist find the original owner of the notes after he became famous?

The author is still a student, mostly in university. The childishness is too obvious

The novel I wrote a few years ago is not as good as the novel I wrote a few years ago. That novel developed quickly, but this one keeps dragging its pace.