Douluo: Double Holy Dragons of Light and Darkness, Dragon King Breaks the Nine Heavens

The writing at the end is so bad, I feel like it was not written by one person 😰😰😰

Why is it written so poorly in the back? Why is Qian Renxue's soul ring configuration so stretched on her hips? Why is it so low? Isn't the first soul ring 1,000 years old? Why did it turn yellow? What did you say before about yellow, yellow, purple, purple and black? And why did you write that the eighth soul ring is 60,000 years old? The ratio of this yellow pill is too low. When he was in the seventh soul ring, he was not 90,000 years old.

To be honest, I feel later that the author didn't use his brain and wrote it completely blindly. Didn't the protagonist and Qian Renxue awaken their martial spirits together? Why is there a five-year age difference between them later? I wanted to write in a more literary style, but I didn't have that writing style, so it was quite embarrassing. The first part was okay, but the second part was complete.

History textbooks all tell us to seek truth from facts, adapt to national conditions, adapt to local conditions, and find a path that suits us... Many fantasy novels about "renaming" are very dramatic, and the author does not want to work hard. The political system is difficult to read without working hard. And you also add diplomatic maneuvering.

Isn't there still a lovesick person in your hand? Why didn't you give it to Qian Renxue? Doesn't he like holding hands?

What's going on? The more I write, the more confusing it becomes. There is a kind of AI article, and there is also a breakthrough that does not require a soul ring. There are 7 soul rings at level 88. What kind of soul rings are soul rings? The beginning is clearly written, but later it becomes two yellow, two purple and three red, which is also six.

What does it mean that the Dark Dragon King is not as good as the Holy Dragon of Light? Repeat it to me. The two strongest dragon kings among the Four Nine Dragon Kings are not as good as shit, and they are not the Holy Dragon of Light, right?

There are all AI articles in the back and they charge a fee.

After pooping, it's just a huge piece of shit

There are a lot of repetitive words like water, just like AI writing

Author, why don't you just steal Huo Yuhao's opportunity? Stop trying to count the words and go directly to the far north to absorb the Ice Emperor's soul ring, or let the Ice Emperor offer sacrifices. In this case, the consciousness will remain in your head, okay? Or go and get Tianmeng Iceworm, I really can't hold myself any longer.