I Am a Godfather in America

At the same time, I am pursuing the author's first two works. Frankly speaking, this book is the most exciting. The character setting, conflict setting, and story structure are all excellent. It is undoubtedly a masterpiece. The reason for the unsatisfactory results may be that 1. The readers are not familiar enough with American society in this historical period and are prone to a sense of distance 2. In the first three chapters, the author may not be in the mood. The writing is not smooth, the grammar and rhetoric are rough, and the reading experience is not very good 3. Youjin But the effect of the fingers is very weak, and those who are directed towards the system will gradually become disappointed. Those who like to read the beginning seriously will be more dissatisfied, and both sides will not be pleased To summarize the advantages: 1. A good popular science article about the peak period of the American Mafia, Albert Anastasia killed the boss and rose to power, and Frank Scalise was eliminated by Anastasia for selling the family position. These are all real things that happened 2. Except for some flaws in details, such as TV remote controls and pagers appeared in advance. This book restores the social scene of the United States in the 1950s very well. It has the chaotic, rough and vibrant flavor of the early post-war period. In the 1950s, many equipment and facilities that greatly improved the quality of human life have been popularized in the United States, such as refrigerators, air conditioners, washing machines, electric ovens, and gas stoves. At this time, the living standards of the American middle class have reached unprecedented heights in human history, but at the same time, organized crime, police In the last golden age of systemic corruption, it is not a joke to rise through the ranks by working as a gangster. The various bizarre and rampant behaviors of the Mafia and the police's assistance in the abuses performed in this book have their own historical background.

So what's the motivation for it all? Why did the pig's feet help a stranger? Or a stranger being hunted by gangsters? Because he hit a time traveler and killed someone? Or is it because he has equipment? Or is it to give Pigfoot the idea and motivation to create a gang? A surgeon traveled back in time for less than a day and killed two gangsters with peace of mind? Sparing a stranger who saw him murder someone? The most important thing is what to do with pig's feet? Want money or power? As far as the cheats arranged by the author are concerned, there are too many ways. Even going to Japan to become the emperor and making the first pot of gold is better than the American gangsters.

Are the themes of this era not appealing to young people? I read a contemporary mafia article written by another veteran author and cut it. There is also a contemporary fbl article who is also insisting. In fact, I quite like them all. They all have a normal rhythm, unlike the super-fast ones that are popular nowadays.

It's well written. The main character is ruthless enough. To cut off the grass, you have to get rid of the roots. Just keep writing like this and don't interrupt. It's very well written. 👍👍👍👍👍

The plot and description are quite good. It's really good that I found this book when I had nothing to do. I found out that the beginning was due to censorship, so it was a bit regretful. I really want to know what the original beginning was like... The author is not good at all. I looked up and looked at the title and found that the chapter was not past chapter 20.

From the introduction, you can't tell that it's going to be a mafia story, or even what the protagonist is going to do. . . It would be much better to simply and directly express that the protagonist wants to control the underground world in this era and then whitewash it, and at present, there is almost no sense of existence in the equipment column. . .

When will the new book be updated? I only saw it after almost 200 photos.

I chased him and saw a system. . . . It's really awkward, there's one less author to follow. . .

Can you not add a system? I hope I can maintain the level of being superior to others.

It's very well written. I like this kind of subject. Best wishes. But as a reader, I have a little suggestion. I personally think that an important element of the novel is the creation of characters. The more flesh-and-blood characters are, the more readers can be emotionally involved. I hope the author can add some multi-perspective and multi-layered plots, such as which brother to send to Chicago or Detroit to intimidate which one. Although it is a small detail, it intuitively reflects the protagonist's growing power and the fact that there are many ruthless men under his command. The protagonist's personal character traits of revenge are also very three-dimensional. It is a small detail, but it really feels real and refreshing to the readers. Therefore, I personally feel that such "details" are needed whether it is character creation or plot advancement. Only in this way can readers have a sense of involvement. Without elaboration of details and only advancing the main plot, it will become boring after a long time. No matter how many characters are added and power is expanded, it will become facial expressions and data. Personal advice, don't spray if you don't like it.

It's rare to find someone who can write about the mafia in a readable way, come on!

I should have ordered 70% of the author's last book. Why don't I order more later? Because the protagonist written by the author does not look like a human being, but like a saint. Does the author understand what I want to express? For readers, the protagonist's enemies can be saints, the protagonist's teammates can be saints, and passers-by can also be saints. But the protagonist is not good. I wrote a book in which the protagonist looks like a saint. I think there are not many popular books on the Internet. I have also ordered the latest chapters of this novel. I also slowly began to feel that the author began to write the protagonist in the direction of a saint again. I personally feel that it would be better if the protagonist is more selfish, self-motivated and driven.

This book has reached the level of others. It is very good. Keep up the good work.

Have you ever found that the books you wrote are too long-winded and difficult to read?

I was listening and looking for a book to read. I was listening to the American equipment column. I went out to refresh and looked for new books, and another equipment column appeared. Ward said, my hobby tab did not have the American equipment.

I feel like the wonderful stereotypes in this world have deepened in the future. There is the legendary anti-Japanese officer Mori Ogai who gave up medicine to join the army. There is also Lu Xun, the resident candidate of our Chinese textbooks who gave up medicine and joined literature. Now there is Al Pacino who gave up medicine and joined the mafia.

It is best not to touch crime-related themes. One reason is that you are relatively sensitive, and the other is because the values ​​and principles of dealing with people in mixed society are too different from ordinary people. Anyway, I really hate those so-called social people.