Rebirth 91: Starting from the Cutoff of Admission Notice

You can read the book, but if you haven't developed enough yet, you're just going around trying to attract hatred. If you don't have the strength to pretend to be a bad person, it's really embarrassing to see you slapped in the face. A bunch of talented students from Jiaotong University act like they have no fucking brains!

Do you have to create conflicts to advance the plot? The web drama flavor is too strong. Liu Qiangdong and Lei Jun all came from the countryside at that time. There is no need to fill every chapter with conflicts.

Ex-girlfriend breaks up, dormitory villains, student union villains, so much rat shit appears at once, guess who will subscribe.

After reading four chapters, it's very fake. It's not that the incident is fake, but the handling method is very fake.

I don't believe that people who went to college in 1991 have never smelled the smell of mothballs. I, who was born in 1992, packed all the wardrobes and drawers at home when I was young. As soon as the dormitory opened the bedclothes, they started scolding, saying it smelled, and I accepted it. Who else in their right mind, from the dormitory, would sneer and ridicule in front of me when we first met? In 1991, no matter how wealthy a family was, it was impossible for them to just open their mouths and talk like that. It only cost a few dozen yuan. Of course, how much salary did a city dweller get per month? Do normal people aged eighteen or nineteen talk like that when they first meet? It's unlikely in real life. You can write facial expressions, eyes, etc. To describe the character's disdain. There are awkward remarks everywhere. Has the author watched too many short dramas?

The author does not understand the ways of the world, or he himself has been severely hurt, resulting in indifference to others. I think it's not an exaggeration to write a letter of thanks for the help from several departments. Because he was the deputy director of the County Education Bureau, the county had to show its commitment to eliminating the negative influence. The person behind the protagonist was Shanghai Jiao Tong University, although at that time Shanghai Jiao Tong University was not as famous as Harbin Institute of Technology. The village committee paid 50 yuan when I went to college. It was still 50 yuan in 1991. The villagers had no vision at all. So they were not allowed to help at this time? Maybe it's because the village where the protagonist lives is too poor. The other problem is the protagonist's character. He is always quarreling with people all day long, and it feels like he has been reborn in vain.

It's 1991, an era when dogs can take off even after being reborn, but pig's feet enter the campus.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can only say that living is very tiring. You are even more tired from writing and are not suitable for relaxing and resting at all.

It's very similar to the time when I first entered college. I was full of ambitions and felt that I had a bright future and a sense of belonging 🙂

He has been reborn, and it's so boring to get a notice. Let's put it this way, as long as you start a group within the system, he will automatically be matched with an opponent.

Just look at the free chapters. The main text is not even as good as the writing style of an elementary school student.

Damn it, either you continue to develop technology, or you rely on rebirth to quickly gain momentum and then go to Hong Kong, Macao and Taiwan and then counterattack Europe and the United States. You, the author, just don't have a clear mind. Shanghai Jiaotong University has a good platform, but the settings for you are like shit. I'm really convinced, and the timeline is all bullshit.

Um, after seeing the latest chapters, the conflict plot is a bit deliberate, the villain is a bit facial, and this Wang Yan made me clench my toes.

Can you stretch your brows to kill mosquitoes? I've only heard that it can pinch mosquitoes to death if it's wrinkled tightly, but I've never heard that it can pinch mosquitoes to death if it's stretched.

The writing about Zhao Tiezhu is too stupid. At least he was admitted to Jiaotong University with high scores and his IQ is online.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I went to buy a bicycle... I felt tired after reading it.

That's it! A little disappointed