Pioneer Lord: I Have an Intelligence System

Have you ever been a pioneer lord? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

The content is smooth and has no ups and downs, and lacks the sense of expectation to follow the reading. As a farming novel, I feel that the territory is always in a very vague state. It just keeps talking about what the protagonist has done, and there are no specific details about the development potential of the resource distribution map. It is hundreds of thousands of words long and I don't even know the protagonist's age, the currency exchange system, and the current year. The extraordinary profession system should be introduced in some depth, and the nine-level training system has long been out of fashion, so the number of levels should be reduced and its thickness increased. In short, the author should work hard and hope to write better works.

This is my first time writing a book. If there is anything you want the author to correct, please leave a comment. You can scold, but don't leave

Have you ever been a lord? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

It's too bland, I feel like I'm looking at aborigines

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Your writing is very good, and your intelligence system is better than many authors. At least the processing of intelligence sources is quite smooth. Unlike them, I left a message asking them to learn prophecy magic! But a common problem among you people is that you have to solve the problem immediately as soon as there is a situation. Putting aside the timeliness of the information, you don't take a long-term view and have no intention of catching big fish. It's like just learning backgammon. Wherever there is a problem, there is no strategy. In this way, the whole article will have fewer ups and downs.