National Sword: I Have Clairvoyance at the Beginning

I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. It's pretty good and has the potential to be popular. But currently, 1. The heroine interacts too frequently, is too easy to get out of the scene, and is very bad. 2. The foreign forces are too strong. I know it's for the plot, but it's just a preliminary plot. It's so big. It's not afraid of attracting attention. How much time do you think it will take for a country, especially our country with the 26-year timeline, to investigate or investigate a foreign force? Let's keep it for now. A novel can be abandoned when one-third of its content has nothing to do with the main plot. Just write these few chapters. How much of the interaction with the heroine is lost?

Speechless, why do you have to find a beautiful leader to pursue?

After reading Chapter 23, I really want to complain. There are too many foreign forces here. If you want to write in a direction that is closer to reality, it is best to be more fictional so that people can see the difference from reality. Otherwise, according to everyone's understanding, the explosives have been released, and there is an obvious organizational structure. If a few people are allowed to go there and do it themselves, without exerting organizational strength, it is a bit underestimating the professionalism of customs.

The description of the case is very good, but he insists on bringing a woman with him, and the endless flirtation is completely putting the cart before the horse! It's off-putting to see too much! The key is to write about customs officers. Is this appropriate for you to write?

When I saw the introduction, I thought of the game Border Prosecutor.

Good subject matter, but it's a pity that it contains too many interactions with women, and it's too biased

The plot is very dramatic and can only happen in novels

I borrowed Guibao to promote a book, "Happiness God", also known as "I feel happy and I can make money continuously". You can get a reward of 5,000 for making a short video and laughing, 8,000 for winning a game, and 10,000 for admiring a beautiful woman... On the left, he hugs his cute and cute little apprentice, and on his right, he hugs a female Chinese medicine doctor who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. From then on, Li Qi's wonderful life has quietly arrived! [Sorry for disturbing you, please contact me to delete]

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