Yutang

Judging from the progression of the plot in these twenty chapters and the author's speech, it can be seen that the author wrote it seriously. But there are two problems: First, some descriptions are too obscure. Character dialogues can be written in semi-classical Chinese, but it is better to use less ancient Chinese to describe expressions and plot advancement, which can easily discourage people. Second, write less history books at the end of each chapter. The last one was written like this, which would have overturned the Han Dynasty. No matter how far it is, it is only written in this way. The free chapters are fine, but if the paid chapters continue to be written so frequently, I will probably have to persuade some of them to quit.

Ming Taizu Zhu Yuanzhang was the only emperor who conquered from the south to the north and established a unified dynasty. This was due to the Huaixi Ma Zheng of the Yuan Dynasty. If Li Yu's Southern Tang Dynasty wanted to unify the world, it must have black technology, either to develop black powder and cast cannons, or to be better than Zhao Da in the navy and form an absolute advantage to directly crush the opponent, otherwise there would be no chance at all.

The best time for the Southern Tang Dynasty to advance northward into the Central Plains was when the Khitans destroyed the Later Jin Dynasty and marched northward in the name of expelling the Tartars. After the establishment of the Later Han Dynasty, the Central Plains had been stabilized, and the Southern Tang Dynasty had no chance. Guo Wei, Chai Rong, and Zhao Da were each more powerful than the other, and basically had no chance.

In fact, most of the daily conversations of the ancient scholar-bureaucrats were in the vernacular! When the scholar-bureaucrats wrote documents, they mostly used classical Chinese. The situations in which the ancients used classical Chinese or half-literate Chinese to speak include: sacrifices, grand ceremonies, and academic discussions between literati. "Water Margin", "The Scholars", "Three Words and Two Pats" and other famous works, whether they are scholar-bureaucrats or common people, the dialogues are all in the vernacular! Nowadays, many book lovers use AI text-to-speech to listen to books. Because people use more and more computers and mobile phones in their daily work and life, their eyesight has declined severely, so many book friends only listen to novels. But the half-written and half-white text is very unfriendly to people who listen to the book. When an author writes a historical novel, except for the dialogue in specific scenes and the presentation of documents written by scholar-bureaucrats, can the author use vernacular in all other places? After all, the rest of the text is written in the author's narrative language, and is written for us modern people. There is no need to use half-literary and half-white language, which is neither historical nor conducive to readers' reading!

This book only has 63,000 words, but it already has 18 characters, which is awesome. The author has done a great job.

As a new reader, I found that the comments from the old readers below do have some truth to them. You, the author, should take this as a warning, otherwise poor grades will be inevitable. There are only three chapters in the beginning, and all the dialogues between the characters give people a very awkward feeling. Everyone understands the meaning of the subjugation to the Chu Kingdom, and the warning of eminent monks, but you can just say that it is awkward to read like this. No matter how good your historical skills are, it is not expressed in such impersonal terms.

The previous classical Chinese article was overused, regardless of the occasion or plot, which greatly affected the fluency of reading.

I even opened a post to brag about it for you, but you ended up switching it within two days Judging from the protagonists you chose in your two books, they were chosen carefully The time and characters in this book are not easy to develop, and the waiting time for succession is too long, but it is not a problem to write well, Li Yu is relatively well-known The first part is too obscure, the second part can be a little whiter, oh, I'm convinced.

The new book issue is very data-heavy. If you don't follow it, there will be no recommendation, especially Tuesday's pk, which is the lifeblood of the Tang Dynasty. Please take advantage of your busy schedule to read the latest chapter and stay for 30 seconds. Sage Jun Xiaochuan Fuwei rules the world with diligence! ! or2

I also like Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, but why do I have to choose Southern Tang. Oh, looking forward to the next one