Wizard: My Alchemy Notes

After reading more, I think the author's writing style is a natural esoterica (esoteric simulator). Stop writing about wizards and take a brighter path 🙂

How to say it? It's quite interesting to watch, but when I'm tired of watching it, a lot of things (such as what is the defensive effect of the wooden house? What is the effect of meditation? Why did Goldfinger create a real violent potion during the simulation? Then what is the unnatural channel? The road of rationality and spirituality that has been mentioned) are not explained at all, and they appear suddenly, without any reference, explanation or supplement in the context. I feel very tired and vague.

The writing level is adequate, but it's really hard to find a category for fantasy.

Don't write less about him moving, it's so embarrassing to watch 😐

This category is really spiritual. Wizards are attracted to fantasy. In fact, although the fantasy section is not as popular as the popular sections next door, the basics have always been there, and it is not so busy. Those with strength and creativity can attract readers - after all, there are only a few leading authors in the fantasy section, and those are the readers. Any good new ones will be seen soon. The fantasy wizard flow can be roughly divided into several styles: 1. Chip flow, which focuses on defeating monsters and upgrading; 2. Knowledge flow, which focuses on the expansion of the worldview; 3. Esoteric flow, which focuses on the description of the atmosphere. Based on what I've seen so far, half of the book's 123 chapters are taken up. Personally, I hope to move towards styles 2 and 3. After all, they are all fantasy wizards. Without a sense of mystery and strangeness, it would not be authentic... Of course, this book is in the fantasy category 🙂

From Tieba. I feel that the writing is still good, the description of the scene and atmosphere are good, and I can keep reading with a sense of immersion. It feels like a step-by-step novel similar to the traditional cultivation of immortality, without any gimmicks or bad jokes. But this may be one of the reasons for its low popularity. If I can maintain this level until the later stages, I feel like my performance will improve. Did you choose this category yourself? Why did orthodox western fantasy invest in fantasy? Novice fantasy is really a stand-alone game in the early stages. Without gimmicks, the number of words is too small and no one will click on it to read it.

What does it mean to drink it alive?

Personally, I think it's messy, and there's no need to dig out so many settings at low levels. You can obviously slowly dig out the settings in the plot. When reading a novel, I still have to figure out how to understand the setting. Exhausted

What can I say, the various plots are still good, but can the expression level be improved?

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It's very strange since the chapter where the old wizard created the carrier

The world view is quite interesting😄

It's okay to read the reviews, go try it first

It's so confusing, I don't understand what's going on in the plot at all. The description of the article is confusing, jumping here and there, and there are too many jumps in the middle. What I want to write in AI has no logic at all.

Lack of punctuation marks, which greatly affects reading