Thunderbolt at the Sky Screen of Heaven: a Group of Martial Arts Heroes Enjoy the Show Together

1. Each paragraph of text is too concise, obviously overused in AI optimization, and written without its own characteristics. 2. The dialogues are too frequent. Whether it is each character appearing or the puppet puppet character in the marquee, there are many dialogue parts, and the transitions are too frequent. The perspective of the marquee is changed before much of the plot is written, and the switching back and forth 3. The plot related to Thunderbolt is so poorly written that it doesn't have the flavor of Thunderbolt at all PS: I am actually not opposed to using AI to write novels, but I personally feel that AI should not be used excessively. After optimization, I need to polish it myself to make the writing more full and natural.

A bunch of people who are in such a difficult situation and can't even count their qualifications as warriors are commenting on masters who can live for hundreds of thousands of years. It's funny no matter how you look at it 😅.

…………Hmm………………Is there anyone watching? Why does it feel like some places are copied and pasted🧐

I listened to the book and listened to a few chapters without vomiting or complaining. What I thought in my mind was that the author could actually write in all the well-known novel characters, no matter how decent they are, and then arrange an inexplicable conversation or inner thought for each person after each short scene. Then after a few chapters, I will reorder them and repost them. In this way, I can easily write a few million words for the Tianmu section and the Zongwu section.

What is it about? What is the main plot? What about the protagonist? I didn't find it at all!

The writing is better than Tomato's... Please don't update, it's extremely hard to find Pili fans.