Infinite: The Dark Hand of the East Sea

Let's take a look at it first. After all, The Path of the Infinite Warrior is the best Infinite novel in my opinion (beyond Z Big Infinite).

The price of things is increased in various ways, and the protagonist is given 1,000 basic points. Is the author writing a story that is exciting or a story that abuses the main character?

Not buddy. . The protagonist has already entered a second world. When I returned to World 1, I entered the world of horror movies three times. Up to now, the protagonist is still an unenhanced mortal. It would be better if you strengthened the C internal power than now. You blindly put your life and death on the artificial man. It was quite uncomfortable to watch. It was all just to watch the protagonist kill everyone. The protagonist of Teacher Warrior Road came back with D internal power for the first time. . Will the protagonist practice the Seventh Heaven of Ice and Fire in the future? It's better to switch to a martial arts with so many high ceilings.

The writing style and ideas are acceptable. It is recommended to revise the introduction quickly.

To put it bluntly, the author actually wrote in the wrong direction. Your rhythm is actually writing about the flow of the heavens, not the flow of the infinite. Moreover, your control over the story and characters is more suitable for writing Zhutianliu. What are the characteristics of unlimited streaming? In the final analysis, it is to complete the task by hook or by crook, scrape away the short-term benefits as quickly as possible like a locust, and then return to the main god space to make interesting constructions. After all, Zhutianliu still has the meaning of a long and thin stream, and it can't be wiped clean so quickly. The author actually wrote the two texts upside down, and I also think the author is more suitable for writing about astronomy.

I closed some of the wheelchairs and ingredients areas that were discussed, but I started to open the human-making device a little, and it felt weird.

I haven't read the novel yet, but the movie Avatar seemed awkward to me. The worldview in it was so distorted that I couldn't relate to the perspective of rape, and I couldn't sympathize with the indigenous people at all.

Avatar has become unpopular... Not good Suddenly I realized that I am getting older, and I will be an adult after 10 years.

There aren't many words in the opening, so I figured out that the rhythm is a bit similar to Another Day in the East China Sea. I'm not saying it's plagiarism, it's just the rhythm and direction. After returning, I changed some of the basic settings of Yuanzu. I suggest the author be cautious. After all, if a newbie writes a new book, changing the basic settings will easily lead to a loss of follow-up reading. Unless you make it clear that chariots and horses are not the space of the main god of Yuanzu, many things are completely unnecessary. It's not that you question the author's ideas. It's okay if you can write new ideas, but it's easy to read the fourth chapter if you don't have a foundation of readers.

Author, when did you start strengthening it? There is no enhancement in Chapter 44. I have read the Infinite novel for so long, and you are the first one. Can you write a few more pages every day?