The Great Wall of the Long Night: I'll Never Repay My Lord's Kindness!

Why are the titles of books with good writing so bad? If I hadn't just glanced at them, I would have missed them.

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It is recommended that the author write this book with a female protagonist or without a female protagonist. At present, I have caught up with the latest chapter. What attracts me is always the cruelty of eternal night, the black and white of human nature, the greatness and darkness. Human civilization will last forever in the struggle of blood and fire. If it is a love line, a carefully crafted love line can make the male protagonist The extraordinary rationality of the book is blended into the warmth and ordinaryness. However, if you write multiple paragraphs, it is not only easy to divide the character description and image, but also easily plunge the cruel tone of the book into some inexplicable emotions. To put it crudely, it is like a mouse droppings spoiling a pot of soup. For me personally, I don't see any poisonous points in this book, so I don't want the author to stumble over the female protagonist. I hope the author can devote more energy to the structure of the world view, the struggle for the interests of human forces, and the war of races. Play to your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. Of course the above are my personal thoughts, you can adopt them or not.

It seems that people in this world who don't get married or have children are all created by a new generation! The operating mechanism is to continuously send men who are refreshed from nowhere to the front line! A little strange!

To be honest, the writing was good, but I was very tired of reading it. I basically played almost 200 chapters without stopping, and they were all hard battles.

The war has been going on, and no matter how many people there are, there are not enough people to die. Moreover, I have not seen anyone farming. They are all fighting. When food is not self-sufficient, winning too many battles will only lead to death. The supplies outside will die immediately.

The data in this book doesn't seem to be very good, but the book is really good. I hope the author can persevere.

Is it an imitation of a sword? Are you going to make a Western fantasy version of the Great Wall of Sword Qi?

If the lord's kindness is not over yet, then just kill the lord and you won't have to pay it back 🙂

There is no heroine, just become a god directly, as long as you keep writing and maintain this level

The environment is written in such a way that it makes people feel that all members of the team cannot survive at Level 4. .

A very good beginning. The main character has a basic IQ and is stable online. The system is not very supportive at the moment. I look forward to the subsequent development of the territory.

The ultimate battlefield confrontation, blood and fire, faith and life.

I have an idea here. Although the human race has been fighting among themselves, the current situation is that the monsters under the blood moon are still evolving intelligence and the conspiracy level is getting stronger even though the overall strength is stronger than the human race. At this time, the human race is still fighting among themselves, and even destroys an entire tear knight for the sake of power. From this perspective, just relying on the lords on the front line who have been brought up to make up the numbers, I don't see why the human race can persist until this point, or the world view is not big enough at present. The human race is still OK in other places, so I don't mind losing a tear knight.

I feel like there are very few lord articles in Qidian. Is it considered a niche category? Do you have any good Lords stories? Can you recommend some?

It's just that the pace is a little faster. It would be better to have some relaxation. But the background of this story is really not relaxing.

To be honest, it's better than the previous version, which was just a peace talk.

If you get the weapon bunker and the like, and add a picture, the experience card will be doubled. My head feels so itchy when I read it. I'm about to grow a brain and I'll be less likely to ask this question.

High-quality food and grass From the last book, we know that the author is very good at writing about lords The main focus is iron-blooded, iron-blooded, iron-blooded. Everything is based on war!

How to maintain a territory where farming is impossible for a long time You can't just rely on others to provide you with it.

Let me talk about the conclusion first, more than food and grass, but not enough jelly grass The plot is smooth, not too much about the Riddler, the plot is laid out normally, and the plot that shows the glory of human nature is smooth and natural; The low-magic medieval setting and the steampunk imagination are well combined, and the settings of various reforms and inventions are logical enough and reasonable. It can be seen that The author is determined; The character of the protagonist, the Philosopher King, is quite complete, rational enough, and decisive in killing; The author is very good at avoiding lightning, with very few poisonous points, and is very refreshing; The biggest shortcoming is that there are many typos or sentence errors, on average, there are three typos or sentence errors in each chapter, which reduces the reading fluency a lot.

Don't be a eunuch, she's very pretty, I'm afraid I'll die from it 🙂

I would like to ask everyone, what do you mainly read when reading the lord article? 🙂 Is it better to take up the role of lord at the beginning, or to lay the groundwork first?

The author doesn't read the comments at all, and won't correct any typos?

No wonder no one has read it, the logic of this novel is flawed

After nearly a month of long thinking, combined with the things I encountered today, I finally know the problems with myself and this novel. To put it simply, I recommend the author to learn about the wind and cold in ancient times, and the real risks faced by "going to Beijing to take the exam" The characters in the author's current works are not miserable and sad enough, lack an objective sadness, but are like "self-righteous sadness" like me before This may be a common problem of most online writers. I admit that my expressive ability is limited, but this is my sincere recommendation, and I hope this novel can be written better. Come on!

Come on, author, you are a great resource 🙂

I've read a hundred chapters and it's very well written. It's just that the human race is still fighting among themselves during the annihilation of the species, and the core defense line has been abandoned by all means. I personally can't stand this kind of plot and I feel angry when I read it.

I seem to have only seen the appearance of parchment in books. The protagonist uses a lot of paperwork to record. Is parchment enough?

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