World War II: France's Death Struggle

Please leave some comments: 1. Cell phones are a poison, even if you directly say that this knowledge is directly in the protagonist's head 2. In the plot, the protagonist mentioned the code name, and then the intelligence officer confirmed it was true and asked about the source, but the protagonist explained that it was deduced from history. I can't understand this explanation at all, let alone why the author would set up such an additional plot. It is a logical flaw in itself, but you still have to take the magnifying glass to show it to readers? 3. This writing style is a bit uncomfortable to read😔It is full of inexplicable "melancholy", as if the protagonist keeps showing "I'm unhappy, come and take care of me" to the people who care about him, like a giant baby

After reading the first three chapters, I will give you my opinion based on what I saw. First, it felt very abrupt in the first chapter. It felt like the protagonist didn't have much fluctuation in his time travel and location, even if he added that he had already traveled through time for a month or two. Secondly, the emergence of mobile phones is definitely a poisonous point. On this basis, it is also necessary to add that it has been used by others. There is still a certain threshold for smooth use of smartphones. It feels strange to people. I think it can be modified to the protagonist who has just traveled through time and is afraid that he will not remember what happened in history. It may be better to write down what happened in history in advance.

The protagonist I write about is not a protagonist, but an NPC.

Why not travel through Türkiye?

Let me talk about my own viewing experience. I was attracted by the subject matter, World War II, France, and war. However, I would like to say that this is a new book. There are more than 30 chapters in total, and more than 20 chapters are all about things in Paris, and the things written in Paris are not very good. I thought that those who wrote about war must have written more about French politics in the past, but I ended up creating more than a dozen chapters on tanks... And the new book, the writing is not very good, there are a lot of logic that seems unreasonable, not to mention there is a lot of nonsense. This kind of nonsense actually appears a lot in other novels, but if the main line of a book is delayed, it will be meaningless and even a bit annoying Actually, I still have quite a few designs that I don't feel are very good, but I suddenly don't want to talk about them anymore. This book is already like this. In fact, if I talk about it, I will just complain or give some opinions on this book, which will not have any effect, so I just won't talk about it and look forward to the author's next book. I don't mean any harm, I'm just telling you how I feel

It feels a bit weird, mainly because although the French Char B1 has a lot of problems and is not very numerous, its strength is really good in the early stage Refer specifically to the Stoney Butcher incident, four Char B1s went out to guard a village, and three of them were lying on the road. The remaining Earl arrived, but it turned out that this B1 was holding down more than a dozen No. 2 And No. 3 Vehicles on the opposite side. The early small water pipe of the No. 3 Could not penetrate the armor of the B1. Later, the second B1 maintenance player, which was not seriously malfunctioning, caught up, and the situation became one-sided.

The author should cut it off, the writing is very poor and no one will read it. The writing is elementary school, the plot is kindergarten, and the characters are illiterate. To put it bluntly, the author is still 18 floors away from being able to write a novel.

Great. Serious World War II novels have been sealed by Qidian for too long. This one is about France. It's very interesting. Unfortunately, my monthly vote has just finished. If I have a monthly vote, I will definitely support you first. Don't cut it!

During World War II, France first understood a very important issue. It was not the difference in military weapons, but the morale of the military.

Now this way of writing makes people want to abandon the book. It doesn't matter if the protagonist forgets that he is a time traveler and treats himself as a local, but no one likes to see a protagonist who is often depressed and depressed.

Alas, since Germany stopped writing, many historical authors can only write about the weaklings of the Allies.

The protagonist struggled for a long time, but still ran to England according to the historical context. It seemed that nothing had changed, even if he ran to the North African colonies to resist,

Historical figures are inherently complex and highly subjective.

At the starting point, this should not be considered an orthodox historical novel. The first ten or so chapters are also not very attractive. The protagonist also has a sense of childlike innocence when doing things and thinking about problems.

Perhaps the bureaucracy did not resist, but Pétain was prepared to surrender without starting a fight? Too funny?

Oops, the author is really a mess.

The writing is okay. But the plot is a bit difficult to wrap up, and it's a bit different from the blue method in history. Let's not talk about how there was such a fierce zz bean steaming at that time. Let's just say that it was too difficult to get into the high-level vision with just a few modified models. There is also the problem of being verbose, but it's okay and acceptable. I don't know if the author can stick to it, but if he can, I will support it.

We still need to pay more attention to history. There is an error and omission. It is too early for the 88-gun to be fired flatly in North Africa.

Can't I catch up with the eunuch even if I log in at the speed of light?

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

It's readable, but the structure is like literature, not like a novel The so-called Goldfinger's mobile phone is just a prop for deus ex machina, not a mark that distinguishes the protagonist from other NPCs.

Will you consider Three Kingdoms and Water Margin in the future?

Can you answer the previous question?

Will you start novels with multiple female protagonists in the future?

Will you start reading novels about the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin in the future?

Not much is known about it, and it cannot attract the interest of reading the novel. If there is no TV series, many people may not know the time when the author explains the history.

Can you answer whether the updated novel has multiple female protagonists?

I have finished reading the French part I can understand that the protagonist has no political talent or scientific research talent and can only be a big boss. There's nothing wrong with that, after all, war is mud. But for example, the protagonist is like a short-lived species, rushing for something, but in the end he gets nothing. It looks like we are going to Africa again. Really, the protagonist seems to have been brainwashed by France. I can completely understand the protagonist to resist fearlessly like the International Brigade, but I cannot accept being like a headless fly and drifting with the crowd. So what exactly are you going to do? Interrupt the Axis powers' tentacles in Africa in advance and prepare to enter Europe in advance? In 1940? Or farming in Africa? But why farm in Africa? Drive out the African Corps and maybe the United States will join the war. I am pessimistic about whether a gold finger that is just a mobile phone can industrialize the colonies-time is the biggest enemy. The biggest difference between a time traveler and an aboriginal is that he has the ability to think ahead of time. If the protagonist doesn't think, you might as well go dig a piece of mud in the trench and become the protagonist - the difference is that there is no difference, maybe it contains more meat than the protagonist. So what exactly are you going to do? (See the picture) I think it is best to go to the Soviet Union as soon as possible, if the protagonist really understands his goal, instead of being trapped in the hatred of his home and country that does not belong to him. 1940, the tail end of the Third Five-Year Plan. The Soviet Union's reform of the huge military resulted in the loss of the tail, and the picketing mechanism for grassroots cadres was basically completed. As long as the protagonist is a communist, he has every chance of becoming a noncommissioned officer. If I don't talk about anything else, let's just talk about T44. I'm going, man! The pure numerical value is beautiful! If the mobile phone can produce a lot of papers and reports on German tank technology, and can also produce research papers on the reasons for the outbreak of World War II, but cannot produce the T44 that can be used on the battlefield if it is fought for a while at the end of World War II, I will delete the comment and leave. Because the protagonist is not the protagonist, the protagonist is France, a fallen fortress that was betrayed and could only smell ashes and blood. It has withdrawn from the stage, and any helmsman who lets it dance again will involuntarily emit the smell of corpse. So what exactly are you going to do?