Lu Mingfei, Become the King of Life-or-Death Dungeon Bets!

This is the starting point, no, the best of all the dragon fics.

Evaluation: It is another high-quality Dragon Tribe fanfic book, with a very Jiangnan flavor. Are all of you who write about dragons written in this way? All the good writing goes to Lu Mingfei...

Those who imitate Jiangnan will eventually become Jiangnan. It is a great sorrow and a great honor.

The writing is good. One of your strengths is that your style is like Jiangnan, but your shortcomings are also like Jiangnan. Jiangnan writes publication literature. He writes a large paragraph at a time. He can spend a lot of pen and ink on various descriptions just for the sublimation of the climax. The reader's reading is coherent, and the emotions can be fermented in the mind to reach the climax at once. But what you write is an online article. As a literary genre with rigid daily requirements, the reader's Emotions can easily be shattered by such intermittent updates, and you won't feel happy when you reach the climax. Jiangnan's style will also seem long-winded when read in an online article. After all, there are too many unnecessary descriptions, and it will appear watery in the limited updates every day. In the end, some people must start to read the book to read it all at once. In other words, they will stop reading. As I said at the beginning, your advantages and disadvantages are all like Jiangnan, and it depends on you whether you want to change your style in the future. More updates can alleviate this problem, but after all, some readers will not be able to stand the problem that the writing style is too wordy, especially when they start spending money after it is put on the shelves, this problem will undoubtedly become more acute and unavoidable. Come on, little author

There are experts too! Control yourself the old way! Lu Mingfei, the god of slot digging concept and game master

This book was so good that I even recommended it to people around me. It was really praised before it was put on the shelf. But is the main line too fast? Before I entered Kassel, the bond between the main characters was clear because of the dungeon, and their strength reached the next generation level. In the final analysis, the essence of dragon romance novels is that it is difficult to write a protagonist who has the strongest combat power when it comes to fighting. How about establishing a new villain in the setting and making it easier to write? For example, the old white king consciousness and the old black king consciousness that were not clean before, or other dragon types. Come on, author, I really like you.

The book is good, but I still feel like I can't escape the fate of being unable to follow up. Good writing will be cursed by writing. The story progresses too slowly and there are too many narrations. I enjoyed it at first but got a little bored later on.

How should I put it? I wrote my own style before it was put on the shelves. It's normal to start to be confused after it was put on the shelves, but I just need to write more. Lu Mingfei's growth has also disappeared. He grew up at first, but more and more he went back and became a dead child again 😐 Lu Mingfei, who obviously enjoyed fighting, stopped fighting and fell in love. He was pretending to be a pig and eating pig feed 😒 It's obviously a dungeon stream but it writes about reality. The advancement of the real-life plot is like something on Baidu Netdisk. The dungeon has become boring, the characters have become boring, and the storyline is like a steamed bun stuffed with steamed buns 😅 There is a feeling that I am writing a novel. For the sake of the word count, I originally wanted to save more and read it together, but after reading two books, I didn't want to read it. In terms of wasting time, reading this novel is a bit too much of a waste of time 🙄

When all the red cherry blossoms have fallen, I can't see you, and my pear clothes are stained with tears

I have read about 70% of it intermittently. The book is really good and the writing tastes good. This is a relatively good article in Dragon Clan, but there is actually a problem that I discovered when I read the book from my perspective, and it is quite serious for me. The problem is that, whether it is reality in the article or a copy, there is a very serious sense of separation between each short plot. It is very serious. How serious is it? I cannot achieve flow-type immersive reading at all. Between each short plot, I have to break away from the immersive reading environment and read the end of the previous chapter repeatedly. Only by imagining the beginning of a new chapter can we have a better transition. Even so, there is still a sense of fragmentation. This is why I wrote a book review when I saw 70% of the book. Because this sense of fragmentation really affects reading. Many times because of this feeling, there will be a feeling of pleasure but not pleasure when I feel good, which is very uncomfortable. Finally, you really need to understand the dragon story relatively well to read this book, and the reading threshold is a bit high.

Fellow dragon clan members have been cursed by Jiangnan, and they were robbed midway and their old age is unknown.

I thought it was killing, killing, killing, but the result is that the child is still weak, and the original flavor is still the same. The Jiangnan Road erosion belongs to

Is this an excellent dragon fan? What did I eat before?

Brother, your copy of Genji Heavy Industries is very well written. On the one hand, you write the fighting scenes very graphically. On the other hand, you were relatively restrained in expressing sentimental emotions at that time The bloody scenes and the sadness of spring and autumn formed a unique sense of beauty. But the Beijing subway in copy two is terrible. The relatively flat structure of the subway station itself prevents your fighting skills from being fully utilized. And your numerous and even artificial emotional expressions have seriously affected the rhythm of the narrative. It was so procrastinating. From the moment I met Chu Zihang, I didn't even know what Lu Mingfei was doing. He was as incoherent as a primary school student. He pretends to be a writer like a bad joker, which is so inconsistent that he is not even as good as the bad boy in the original work. At least the bad boy's behavior is logical and natural For the next copy, I suggest that you choose more places with complex buildings that can give full play to your fighting skills. As for emotional expression, save what you can. This is not your strong point.

Zero, what do you say about this character? I feel that his interaction with Lu Mingfei is exactly like he is doing the master's task. Because Lu Mingfei lived at his aunt's house for six years instead of six days. During this period, the nanny team was also monitoring him, and Zero was also very aware of Lu Mingfei's living environment. However, people listened to the devil and waited until Lu Mingfei arrived in Kassel before going to Lu Mingfei's side. Don't you think it's strange? Is there anyone who has the same opinion as me?

Before reading, I want to ask in advance, the author did not force Chu Xia CP 🤔

The real world of boiling water and the dream world are copied from the original text. Most of the picture is the original text, and the rest is a little changed in the dialogue and character actions.

Looking at Bloodmourn now, is it really not Jiahao?

The Dragon Clan fandom is like this. It's okay to imitate the original work at first, but the writing is like being obsessed with it, and the plot lines start to become "lu Mingfei", and all kinds of escapades and nonsense are made.

The part about imitating Jiangnan is okay, but it's a pity that the author doesn't have the same family background as Jiangnan. You can see that there are no characters in Dragon Clan because my resources are limited, so I'm afraid to give resources, love, and power to others, because Jiangnan is obviously a big dog. The author grew up in a family with relatively few resources, and is very concerned about resources. It is relatively sensitive. Compared with the love that Jiangnan cannot get and the sadness of loss, I prefer to write a protagonist who digitizes the gain and loss of material and emotions. In fact, this is no longer a dragon novel about youth. There is no need to stick to the sorrow of the dragon family, just write more about super power battles.

They are basically copies. The plot in reality advances very slowly and is completely abbreviated.

It feels like the writing is a mess at the end, with things here and there, and what should I say, the plot is so timid.

It's the Dragon Clan again, and fellow Dragon Clan members are either entering the palace or on their way there.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the ratio between copies and reality is completely irreconcilable. The main selling point of the author's book is that Lu Mingfei made copies one after another, and the plot of the copies is composed of the original text. What readers want to see is how Lu Mingfei changed reality one by one after finishing the dungeon. However, the tone of the book makes it impossible for the author to cut off the copy part, so this will inevitably lead to the plot becoming lengthy and difficult to advance.

Do you have Teacher Daye and Senior Sister Nuonuo as the heroine?🤔 If so, I'll definitely pick them up😁

It's not that I'm afraid of getting the code. Why hasn't the fifth update come yet?

The later stages were a bit lackluster. I think it was because the prison road was too strong and there was too much information, so I didn't have to fight with anyone.

It's a bit too invincible, so I read it as a cool article

Lu Mingfei, father, father, father, is too awkward. In the original book, no Dragon King calls him father... And all the details are clear. Lu cannot be the Black King. Lu Mingze has made it clear that he wants to kill the Black King. Who can call the Black King a traitor? The World Tree... The World Tree was overthrown by the Black King, and then Ragnarok, isn't this rebellion? The school emblem is also half of the world tree... According to the predicted identity of the Black King, Nono's name is Chen Motong. The ink is black. The Black King's eyes and bloodline can make Caesar's family take notice. How pure is it? Nono also has a younger brother's key, and the key's condition is obviously abnormal...

The relationship between three people